西安郭杜大学城学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习的最好方式之一。
请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。
注意：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中；3. 词数：100词左右；【答案】例文Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated youare, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。
而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。
”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。
请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。
作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。
审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。
短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。
写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。
为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。
或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。
短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。
文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。
结构清晰，安排合理。
其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。
语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。
短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。
3．（·山东中考模拟）写作假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。
请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。
2. 陈述自己的理由。
3. 提出至少2条建议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。