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新人教版九年级英语第四单元写作指导

The biggest change in my life was_____ _____________________________________.
This is the most important change because_______________________________ _____________________________________.
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the past few years. I used to have so much time, but now I’m too busy. I always used to get up early and stay in school all day. Before I go to high school, I used to spend lots of time playing games with my friends, but I just don’t have the time anymore. In the evening, I used to watch TV or play computer games, but now I have to study.
1. 我过去是走路上学的。 I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.
2.我过去喜欢跑步,但现在我喜欢打篮球。 I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.
Proper linking words between sentences(连接词)
Proper linking words between sentences (使用恰当的连接词)
Write sentences by using used to:
1. I/have curly hair/have straight hair I used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair.
•first, second, third (the most important)
•firstly, secondly, thirdly (finally), 首先,第二,第三
表示举例子: •for exampl as 比如 •like 像
hobbies: read cartoon/ novel, sing,dance, play football/ basketball…
Discussion
What makes a good composition?
写作步骤 • 审题立意 • 定主人称时态 • 用词得当 • 检查修改
写作时
• 找关键词 • 由词组句 • 组句成段 • 扩句成段
Paragraph 3: To express your own ideas
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to_________________________. Now I’m ______________________________.
Talking
Appearance:
tall, short, fat, thin, slim,strong, young, old, straight hair, curly hair, long hair, short hair, a medium body …
Talking
Personality: humorous,outgoing,serious, funny, smart, friendly, shy, helpful, quiet,active,brave,unfriendly...
I love music, and my father used to
take me to concerts. But I still really
love my present life. The biggest change in my life was
I’m more busy than before, because I went into high school and I have more homework.
2.I/so fat/thin I used to be so fat,but now I am thin.
Write sentences by using used to:
3.I/shy/outgoing and brave I used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave.
Try to write three paragraphs.
(总分总)
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life.
Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened.
4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western culture I used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture.
Write sentences by using used to:
Content
Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整)
Structure
Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾)
Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
表示转折:
•however (but) 然而(但是)
表示个人观点: •In my view 在我看来 •In my opinion 我认为 •As far as I am concerned 就我而言
3b Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one, and why?
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
Talking
3a Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes.
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