IELTS大作文讲解:Discuss 类作文学生面授老师时间本次课时IELTS写作第五课时教学思路1.作文简介、写作技巧2.实例讲解3.课后作业教学目标1. Discuss类作文理论分析2. 掌握此类作文的基本特征和写作方法3. 学习写作思路讲解重点写作理论分析范文学习常用句式总结备考资料剑桥真题、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》教学详细内容:一、分析雅思写作——Discuss类理论1.题目特点及解题思路1)题目特点:Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion. 2)解题思路:这种题型可参考以下两种写法:A.一边倒:作者明确表明赞同一方观点并进行论证支持B.两方面:作者对观点从两方面进行阐述3) 文章结构包括:a: 开头段,背景阐述,引出论题b: 分析阐述two points of view的一点,正或反c: 分析阐述另一方观点d: Your opinion,(可从两点中任选一个,也可以折中的两方面论述)2.写作技巧讲解1、比较选择类的题目重在比较二字。
比较的本质自然是吧两个观点的支持论点放在一起看哪一个更有力。
2、讨论类的作文里可以找到相对立的两个方面(同意/不同意;观点一/观点二;优点/缺点)。
在下笔前,需要确定自己所倾向的观点是什么。
对于雅思写作,不需要过多的追求新颖独特,言之有理即可。
这意味着我们可以站在赢的一方去写:比如,讨论online shopping好还是去shopping mall好的一个问题有同学说:当然是传统的购物方式好,论据是在shopping mall里可以看到具体货品,质量更可靠。
而提到online shopping的好处时:购买方便(省时,省力)货品便宜、选择多样等。
既然这样,我们就要考虑一下,是不是站到shopping online更好这一面去写更容易写呢?3.常用句型及模板:常用句型:1)对于…这一观点,我表示支持I subscribe to / am favor of an opinion that …2)关于…研究得最多的话题对…造成了影响The most studied issue that… has been the impact of … on…3)大多数人普遍接受… It is widely accepted by most that…4)不用说… It goes without saying… Needless to say, it is…5)然而,基本上能肯定的是… However, what is almost certain is that…6)在最近几年里,…的持续曝光已经引起新的讨论In recent years, the ongoing disclosure of … has ignited a new row on …7)与此相反的意见是… The counter-argument is that …8)在我看来,对…的反对意见是基于不正确的事实和偏见的It seems to me that the objection against … is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes.9)两个观点都是部分正确Both sides are partly right.10)细看一下这个说法,并不是那么有道理This statement is less self-evident than it first appears.模板:开头段:_____ now plays such an important role in so many people's lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing or a curse. People's opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial topic. Advocates maintain that _____. Opponents, on the other hand, contend (argue/insist) that _____. Obviously, both sides have over-simplified this issue. Actually, its value to people and society depends on how it is used.正文段一:Those advocates who maintain that _____ tend to present following reasons..正文段二:However, opponents may examine this issue in another angle. For one thing, ____.For another, ____.Furthermore, ____.结尾段:In any case, whether the ultimate effect of _____ is beneficial or detrimental, one thing is certain that _____ in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society. (Weighing the two sides, both arguments seem to bereasonable, after all.)二、实例分析题目: 剑桥真题7 Test 1It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.You should write at least 250 words.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.1.题目分析题目意思:人们普遍认为,有些人天生就具有一定的天赋,例如在体育或音乐领域拥有他人所没有的才能。
然而,有的人认为通过教育任何孩子都能成为一个优秀的运动员或音乐家。
讨论上述两种观点并给出你自己的意见。
审题关键:首先,要确定本题涉及的领域是教育;其次,双方意见的争论点是——先天才能还是后天教育;最后,考生看到先天还是后天的时候不要想当然的因为是旧题,本题还是侧重在音乐或者体育领域。
从结构上来看:这篇文章的题型是Discuss,因此文章可以分为三个部分:首段引入话题,正文第一段讨论第一种说法,正文第二段讨论第二种说法,结尾段表达并总结自己的观点。
2.范文分析①The②relative importance of natural talent and training is a③frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.①首段背景介绍;②relative importance, 相对重要性,是一种非常地道的表达方式;③frequent比起popular,是一个更为学术的词汇;①Obviously, education systems②are based on the belief ③that all children can effectively be taught to④acquire different skills, ⑤including those ⑥associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find⑦plenty of evidence to support the view⑧that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.正文第一段主题句:雅思大作文写作的正文部分每段必须有主题句,即分论点;①Obviously用在段首,承上启下;②Be based on, 词组的用法;③定语从句;④学到技能,用acquire;⑤Including的用法;⑥Associated with,词组,与……相关的意思;⑦Plenty of,用以替代many,a lot of等口语化的词或词组;⑧定语从句。
①However, some people believe that②innate talent is③what④differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. ⑤In other words, ⑥there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this⑦extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.①However表转折,连接上下文;②Innate talent,固定搭配,与生俱来的天赋;③表语从句;④Differentiate A from B, 把A和B区分开来;⑤进一步解释说明的表达方法, in other words;⑥There be句型,雅思大作文要活用there be 句型;⑦Extra talent,地道用法。