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西安交通大学附属中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

西安交通大学附属中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1.(·北京中考模拟)从下面两个题目中任选一题....,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①假如你是李华,本周六龙湖公园将举办端午节游园活动。

你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter和你一起参加,请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他你们见面的时间、地点,在那儿可以做些什么以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语: meet, take par t in, the dragon boat race, make Zongzi, camera…提示问题:When and where are you going to meet?What can you do there?What do you advise Peter to prepare?Dear Peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua题目②“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。

”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。

某英文网站正在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈谈你的梦想是什么?你为什么会有这样的梦想?为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做?提示词语:want to be, like, study hard, come true...提示问题:● What's your dream and why?● What will you do to make your d ream come true?【答案】例文:Dear peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or yoursmart phone if you want to take some photos.I’m looking for ward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文,给Peter写一封信,邀请他参加端午节游园活动,告诉我们见面的时间、地点以及要做的活动。

【详解】结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一、三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:This Saturday is……,There will be……,We are going to……,We can watch……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头表示我邀请你参加端午节游园活动,接下来介绍我们见面的时间和地点以及可以做的事,最后期望收到你的回复。

此处invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2.(·河南中考模拟)“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。

请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题,介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。

作文是开放式的,题目中只给了主题,具体的写作内容,需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。

审题可知,体裁是记叙文,记叙一件自己做过的事情,且是能让自己感到自豪的,故文章应使用一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。

短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成,开头引出话题;第二部分为中心,具体描述事情的过程;最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语,应从句子的整体结构出发,使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构,如主谓宾或主系表结构。

为提升作文档次,穿插使用并列句或复合句,如宾语从句、状语从句等。

或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,以使文意连贯。

【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。

短文有如下几个特点:首先短文内容完整、充实,叙述具体,详细,作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事,符合题目要求。

文章分三段,第一段用一句话引出话题;第二段详细描写了事情的过程;最后一段写了自己的感受。

结构清晰,安排合理。

其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述,注意了谓语动词过去式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式。

语言得体,语法规范,句式结构以简单句为主,也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。

短文中较好的句型和短语有:I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。

3.(·福建中考模拟)宽容是一种美德,人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊,面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光。

请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅了对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

注意:不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语:forgive原谅提示问题:What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between ...【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文,请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅了对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受。

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