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CET Guided Writing目标: SHOW出自己的水平ASSERT YOURSELF原则: 只写有把握的Part I Grading Criteria2008年12月RANGE-FINDERS(4WSH1)定稿Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2.由此带来的问题3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义14 pointsDisposable plastic bags were once widely used. As they were cheap and convenient, we depended on them to carry things when shopping. They had become part of our everyday life.However, disposable plastic bags have brought lots of problems. Firstly, due to theirchemical structure, the bags are difficult to break down. Moreover, some poisonous chemicals in the plastics will set off to the soil and damage our crops. Finally, our health may be harmed and the environment may be badly damaged. Can you imagine our earth being covered by millions of plastic bags?So, it really makes sense to limit the use of disposable plastic bags. By reducing the use of them, we can protect our environment and ourselves. Maybe it will be a little more costly to use other bags, but the benefits we get greatly outweigh the extra money we pay. In a word, it’s necessary to limit the use of disposable plastic bags and in this way, everyone of us can make a contribution to a better environment.11 pointsAs we all know, disposable plastic bags were widely used in the past. We would use them whenever we went shopping. Thedisposable plastic bag brought us lots of conveniences.However, the problem the plastic bag brings is also serious. It makes our environment dirty and messed when flying in the air. And the most serious point is that it can’t disappear itself soon, it will last for a long time. So many people call the disposable plastic bag “the White Pollution”.The time has come when we should limit the use of disposable plastic bags. The action will make our environment cleaner and more comfortable for us to live. On the other hand, when we replace disposable plastic bags, the action will save a lot of money for sellers as well as the buyers.So let’s take action to limit the use of disposable plastic bags. It will do a lot of good to us.8 pointsWe all have such experinenc: after we went to the super market, we always get some plastic bags. Even the disposable plastic bags pollute our environment, few of us can refuse to get plastic bags, because we are used to use it.With the flying developing of economic, the disposable plastic bags are more wide used. But our environment can’t stand by the heavy pollution. The disposable plastic bags will exist many years, maybe the plastic bags which you ever used would still be there when you have a grandson. So it not only effect our life but also hurt our afterspring.So the government started to limit the use of plastic bags. This action is effective that many people use paper or clothing bags instead of plastic bags. Although there are many plastic bags are used, I think after some years, we will feel the advantage that limiting the use of plastic bags bring to us.5 pointsFor easy, Disposable Plastic Bags were used widely. They are very popular for us. Though many Disposable Plastic Bags have so much different face, they usually be used once. Then they would be take off everywhere.With Disposable Plastic Bags were used more and more, the problems are going to trouble. They could’t discover and they could’t for turn. They have become a great problem for our envirenment. When we are walking in the street, we can see the bags everywhere. They would fly when it have wind. The bad behavior influenced our city clean very seriously. So we must think out some ideas to solve the problem.The use of Disposable Plastic Bags must be limited. We could take basket or bags which can return, when we go shopping. I wish we can do our best for protecting our enviroment.2 pointsToday arise any pulation question. Then many people have knowing this question and want to work out. From this way we bring out many circumstances thing. For that air become unusually, some question of food, many people to have ill and so on.From now and up, many man thinking that limiting the use of Disposable plastic bags. May be it was one best way to put up our’s live, because have best air and we can health body.Use of plastic bags, on the world’s ice had become water and then pulation turn to warm. From use of plastic bags, rise many air question. If we have no mean to make out that question we could not think the world will become. Now we can be luckly for we know that question. That way of limiting the use of Disposable plastic bags, may put up air. We want to many of thing to bring up our air. And then we can live more than health.Part II Style: Written or Spoken?a. He tried to make good use of his abilities in the new job.b. He endeavored to utilize his abilities in the new position.a. This is a good book and contains a lot of interesting details.b. This is a fascinating book and contains a wealth of historical detail.抽象名词Reading makes us happy.Reading is one of the major sources of human happiness.Compare:a. Because many people desire to learn foreign languages, many language school appear.b. Many language schools are called into existence by the social demand for foreign language learning.a. When seeing their children improve studies to some degree, parents will feel happy.b. The slight improvement in the children’s studies will lead to their parents’ happiness.a. As more and more people realize the importance of environment, they are more and more interested in home gardening.b. Growing public awareness of environment has created a surge of interest in home gardening.a. Because one can’t know what kind of knowledge will be more useful in the future, he may not make an intelligent choice in taking school course.b. The inability to predict what kind of knowledge will be more useful in the futureprevents a person from making an intelligent choice in taking school course.c. The inability to predict the usefulness of knowledge in the future is a barrier to his selection of school course.Part III Variety in Choice of Wordsassume, claim, take it for granted that, make an assertion thatmaintain, insist, argue, stick to the belief that, are of the opinion that, are convinced thatbe fond ofbe keen onbe enthusiastic abouthave a passion forbe crazy abouthave an enormous appetite forfeel inclined to dowould rather dochoose to doprefer to …rather thancan’t resist (surfing the Internet)a craze fora boom inenthusiasts ofappeal to sbwin the hearts of sbare appearing in large numberstremendous amount of study, practice and devotionan abundance of valuable informationa multitude of little thingsa vast store of knowledgethe overwhelming majority of the publica considerable proportion of the populationa wide range of people of all agesa (whole) host of difficult problemsmasses of messagesa mountain of worka flood of publicityhave tons of moneyhave ample opportunity to doinnumerable/countless + Nbecome increasingly important/intensea growing number of job-huntersan ever-increasing number of tourists Talents are leaving the country in growing numbers.a higher proportion of girl studentsgrow in importance/power/wealththere is growing awareness thata. TOTALabsolutely (right/fantastic/no evidence) completely (awful)entirely (depressing/disagree)fully (convinced)totally (impossible/unacceptable)utterly (impossible/useless/irrelevant) suitable for this job in every wayAfter 20 years there, he felt he was an Australian through and through.Einstein was an idealist through and through.b. VERY STRONGvery (bad)extremely (good/difficulty)highly(dangerous/toxic/flammable/unlikely) More:alarmingly, surprisingly, amazingly, breathtakingly, significantly, dramatically, enormously, incredibly, strikingly, considerably, exceptionally, exceedingly, extraordinarilyalarmingly highbreathtakingly beautifulridiculously high (salary)enormously successfulextraordinarily friendly and helpfulexceedingly difficult/complex questionbe tremendously impressed bywork incredibly long hourschange significantlyc. MODERATEfairly (safe)reasonably(expensive): to a satisfactory degreequite (cheap)pretty (cold/good) inf.somewhat (high opinion) fm.e.g.She speaks Japanese reasonably well.He works reasonably hard but has never been promoted.a reasonably good filma reasonably priced hoteldrill:We have seen a ______disastrous decline inour readership.It’s ______essential we make money on this product.Our ______ low quality levels are threatening the future of this company.Key: totally; absolutely; pitifullyPart IV Differences between E/C学习知识*learn/study knowledgeacquire/obtain/take in knowledge完成任务*finish a taskaccomplish/fulfill a task环境natural environmentcultural circumstancescomfortable surroundings意识law awarenesscompetitive spiritreligious consciousness税government revenuecustoms dutiesincome tax卫生personal hygienepublic healthenvironmental sanitationPart V Types and Topics Type1: View PresentationType 2: Phenomenon Analysis Type 3: Narration and Comment Type 4: Chart and Table Analysis Type 5: LettersTopic 1: Campus life and studyTopic 2: Social phenomenaTopic 3: Environment and conservationTopic 4: Philosophical principles1.开头和结尾:漂漂亮亮2.主题句:清清楚楚3.分析问题:先退再进4.提出建议:三元法Task 11.观点陈述(A/B)2.表明态度(A/B)3.提出建议1.有人主张大力发展私家车。

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