欢迎参加基于建构主义的交互式写作与评阅实验课。
在这一门课里，我们将通过网上写作--交互评阅--自我反思的过程，从词句到段落再到篇章进行议论文写作训练。
该实验课为每周二晚7:30-9:00实验楼109。
第一讲写出语法正确，形式多样的句子1.1 常见句子错误分析Ⅰ逗号连接两个独立的句子I like sports, they can improve my health.改为:I like sports. They can improve my health.或:I like sports; they can improve my health.或:I like sports because they can improve my health.或:I like sports which can improve my health.或:I like sports and they can improve my health.My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put up with him any more.改为:My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly put up with him any moreⅡ动词（短语）作了除谓语以外的其他成分改为:Raising pets is becoming more and more popular.改为:Students spend too much time on television, ignoring their studies.或:Students spend too much time on television, and ignore their studies.或:Students spend so much time on television that they ignore their studies.I am a student lived in room 808.改为:I am a student living in room 808改为:I am a student coming from China.Ⅲ动词形式使用错误改为:Raising pets can bring us a lot of disadvantages.Ⅳ主谓不一致I am a student who live in China.改为:I am a student who lives in China.How we solve this problem are a controversial issue.改为:How we solve this problem is a controversial issue.改为:Raising pets is a great pleasure to many people.改为:Raising pets is becoming more and more popular in big cities.With the limited budget. The government is unable to invest much money in education.改为:With the limited budget, the government is unable to invest much money in education.Now is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.改为:Now it is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.Ⅶ代词使用错误If one has talents and self-confidence, we will surely succeed.改为:If one has talents and self-confidence, he will surely succeed.中式英语改为:It is easier to use computer to control the procedure of the big project.As the internet comes into our life, our life has taken place many changes.改为:As the internet comes into our life, many changes have taken place in our life.用词不当Some people are worried if computers can instead of human beings.改为:Some people are worried if computers can replace human beings.Please write to me if you are convenient.改为:Please write to me if it is convenient for you.One of the most significant changes is families are not as close as before.改为:One of the most significant changes is that families are not as close as beforeⅪthere be句型使用错误There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.改为:There are more and more people going abroad nowadays.或:There are more and more people who go abroad nowadays.There is a social phenomenon has aroused that families are not as close as before.改为:A social phenomenon has aroused that families are not as close as before.There is a tall building stands in the way.改为:There is a tall building standing in the way.或:There is a tall building which stands in the way.或:A tall building stands in the way.Ⅻ从句使用错误The reason why fast food is gaining popularity in China is because it is delicious and inviting.改为:The reason why fast food is gaining popularity in China is that is delicious and inviting.改为:It is a must that college students grasp a foreign language.重复累赘In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so.改为:In my opinion, the owner is justified to do so,As far as I’m concerned, I personally think that it is improper for him to say so.改为:As far as I’m concerned, it is improper for him to say so.XV 改错练习改正下列句子中的错误[1] It is benefit to children.[2] I am agree with the later view.[3] We must choice a way which is suit for me.[4] I think we should thinking about this issue objective.[5] As one of the most popularity thing is study abroad.[6] First of all, foreign countries, which create a wonderful language atmosphere for students.[7] Young people go to abroad is difficult.[8] In nowadays, there is a great number of people choose to study abroad.[9] More and more children has been gone abroad to continue their study.[10] Now more and more parents sent their children to study abroad.1.2 句子的多样性能运用形式不同的句子结构来表达思想是一篇文章成熟老练的标志。
文章中不仅要有简单句，也应该有复合句，并列句。
请看下面的例子：English becomes more important. All of us know the fact. Our society is more open to the world. But it’s difficul t to learn. I have learned English for seven years. But I am still not good at it. Because English is different from Chinese..整篇文章成了简单句的堆积。
这种作文只能是中学生的英语水平，语法基本没有问题。
但句型缺少变化，语义缺少连贯。
请看修改过的文章：It is well known that English has become increasingly important, especially to a society more open to the world. It is difficult, however, to be good at it----although I have learned English for 7 years----because of its complete difference from Chinese.再比较下列句子，就会发现B句式不仅复杂，而且表达生动有力得多。