中考英语专题讲义：代词（带答案）学科老师辅导讲义二、英语书面表达专项训练2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。
提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题：● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chi nese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday ..Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。
学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。
文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。
文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。
3.高分亮点：短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。
句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。
3．书面表达亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。
假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。
通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。
请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。
注意事项：1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
【答案】How to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parent-ch ild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。
写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。
然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。
短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。
写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。
合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。
其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。
句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式。
同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。
短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。
短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。
这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。
其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。
句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。
行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。
短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。
4．假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校成功举办了“中华诗词朗诵比赛”，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。
内容要点如下：注意事项：（1）须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯作、适当发挥；（2）词数在80个左右，文稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数；参考词汇：中华诗词朗诵比赛 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition;表现 performance; 高度评价think highly of ;朗诵recite;天赋gift;免费的freeI'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school...【答案】I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The competition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students' wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【详解】本题是一篇给材料作文，介绍“中华诗词朗诵比赛”活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。