高考英语作文-------感谢信
[经典考题] (悟一悟)
[典例](2018·青岛模拟)假定你是李华。
最近,你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。
学习期间,你和房东Mr. Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。
请根据下面的写作提纲,给Mr. Wilson发一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1.表示感谢;
2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助;
3.邀请他来中国游览。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[满分范文]
Dear Mr. Wilson,
①How is everything going? ②I’ve been back home now. ③I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
④While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable. ⑤How I miss the days we spent together!⑥Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon. ⑦I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. ⑧Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me. ⑨By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improve my spoken English.
⑩I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future. ⑪It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
[阅卷评点]
①开篇问候,显现礼貌。
③gratitude是高级词汇,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
⑤句中使用了感叹句和定语从句,大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。
⑩高级短语keep in touch with和communicate with的正确使用为文章锦上添花。
⑪本句中it作形式主语,so that ...引导目的状语从句,这显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力,增加了。