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公开课 概要写作技巧---找要点
1. 介绍事物→描述性质/功用 2. 问题→解决方法 3. 现象 →原因→本质
argumentation(议论文 )
the topic → the supporting evidence→ writer’s
Exploration:
Read the summary below and find its outline
2 Poor Vocabulary (词汇简单,无丰富词汇句式)
3 Not brief and logical
(不简洁,不连贯)
4 Other problems (书写,分段,拼写,词句错等)
Part 3 Skills of Reading for points
Presentation
Skill 1.Fast reading for the genre (快读定体裁)
Skill 2--
Skimming for the topic or purpose
Why? (略读知主题/意图)
Knowing the topic can help us : 1, leave out unnecessary details (删除无关细节) 2, present all the points correctly (正确呈现要点)
B2 U4 Reading: Narrative (记叙文)
How Daisy learnted to help endangered wildlife
①Summary:Daisy learned to help endangered
wildlife by visiting three places on a flying carpet.
Skill2- Choose the topic for the paragraph
As is known to all, sports stars earn much money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball star,for example, earns more than 20 million dollars a year.Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even say that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contributions(贡献) to society are much less than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that.
Tip1-- knowing the genre,knowing the outline
Why do we need to know the genre?
narrative(记叙文 ) 1. story (5w+1h):who, what, when where,why,how 2. event(beginning-development-ending) exposition (说明文 )
Consolidation for Skill 1- judge the genre(体裁)
( A)
As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball star,for example, earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year.Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even say that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contributions(贡献) to society are much less than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that.
Part 2--Leading in
◆While reading
Wrong Topic
( 主旨和原文不符)
2 Wrong Points/ lack points (要点错误/少要点)
3 Not complete or details (要点不全/细节作要点)
◆While writing
1 Without Own Language (抄原句,无自己语言)
Part 1 Warming up
What is a summary?
It's a short statement(陈述) that covers only the main points of sth, not the details《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
概要:用简短扼要(brief)的语言客观(objective) 全面 (thoroughly)呈现要点。
Skill 2 Skimming for the topic or purpose (略读知主题/意图) Skill 3 Scanning for the topic sentence
(寻读找主题句)
Skill 4 Skipping for the key points or sub-points (跳读找主次要点)
Skill 5 List all the points in a form
(用表格,列要点)
Skill 1. Fast reading for the genre
Find the target words and Judge the genreof the passage below (快读体裁相关的目标词汇并找出下列文章体裁)
an opinion is one belives but can't be proved .So in a trial ,a judge only trusts the facts which is called evidence.
The summary is based on_A___(A 事物B问题C现象)
The summary is based on___A______
A: 5 w +h B:beginning-development-ending ②B 2 U1 a fact or opinion (exposition说明文): Summary: A fact is something that can be proved and
A:Sports stars earn much money B: The stars deserve the high pay C: Sports stars have no contributions D: The author don't agree with the above views
Consolidation- Skim and Chosse the topic
Part 1 Requests ?(高考写作要求) Read: a given passage(about 350 words)
Write:
a 60-word summary (一段60词) cover 3-5 points (3-5个要点) use your own words (自己的语言) in the third person (第三人称) use the brief sentences (简明扼要) proper connection (恰当衔接)
Scientists find that the hard-working people
live longer than average men and women. CareeTripw2o-m-Wenheanreyhoeualsthkiiemr ,tyhoanu hcoaunseigwnivoerse. Evidetnhceesclsahuoswethbautttphaeyjoabtlteesns tairoenintoptohoeremr ain healthsethnatennjcobe-略ho读ld时er可s. A以n忽in略ve从sti句ga,tio关n 注sh主ow句s that w和h结en论ever the unemployment rate(失业率) increases by 1%,the death rate increases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point:work is helpful to health.
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