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大学英语四级作文谚语名言类

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above wealth”. (没有必要用一对引号) 改为:As the saying goes, health is above wealth.
• 第二段 As far as I am concerned, important as health is, the meaning of life does not lie in health. 论点1:Many people of ill-health accomplish great things in life. Take Zhang Haidi for example. Despite her disability, she
• 例子
• 1. As the saying goes, health is above wealth.
• 1. One of the great men once remarked, life without health is lifeless.
• 1. Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb, life that lacks health lacks everything.
• (Let us) Take Stevie Job for example.
• Take Stevie Job as an example. Imagine how much more he could have done to the world if he had not died at such a young age? (虚拟语 气/反问句式)
• 其他类似的题型
题型分析
• 话题写作(Topic writing)
– 针对某一社会现象,分析原因并论述你的观点。 – 一般会给出中文提纲,要求按照提纲的顺序写
作。 – 提纲的结构一般是:
• 现在存在某一现象(对现象本身进行描述) • 分析造成这一现象原因或是现象会带来的影响 • 我的观点
• 社会现象新事物
• 第二句 • It means that … • In other words, … • 第三句 • It goes without saying that / • It is obviously clear that / • It is universally acknowledged that
• 2. It means that health is of the topmost importance/value in our life.
• 2. It indicates that making money at the cost of health is not worthwhile.
• 2. it means only people who are in good
• 句型
• 1.
• An English proverb says,
• As the saying goes,
• One of the great men once remarked,
• Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb,
• 说理
• History / Our society abounds with the examples of…
• Edison / Columbus / Einstein
• Such examples /instances might be given indefinitely, but this will be sufficient to show that…
• On the other hand / On the contrary, if …
• There is hardly a man who can achieve success without …
• All evidence points to / justifies / lends support to the fact …
• (第二段) First of all, health is the foundation of a quality life. Without a good body, the accomplishments one made, the relationship one kept, the social status one tried hard to build would turn into nothingness eventually. Take Stevie Job as an example. He could no longer enjoy the fruit of the huge accomplishments he made after he died untimely at 56. Furthermore, A good body is something through which one is able to experience the world. Without a good health, one can not travel or study, thus opening our mind and enriching our life. Moreover, much evidence points to the fact a healthy person tend to hold a more optimistic and more confident view, and can fit into the society better. (7 句)
题型分析之一------谚语警句型
Para.1 (一般三句话) 1. 点明文章要阐述的谚语或名 2. 用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思 3. 论点句,表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度 Para.2 (一般六句话) A. 支持性的细节分论点 (至少两个论点;举例
子证明,可以用正反两方面的逻辑)
B. 从事实引出结论,再说明论点 Para.3 (一般二至三句) conclusion:阐明其现实或更深远意义
Packaging following the outline below:
• 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 • 出现这一现象的原因 • 我对这一现象的看法和建议
题型分析
– 实例2 – Model test 4 – Write an essay on the topic Stop Spoiling Your
• 第一段如何写?
• 1. 点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或现象
2 . 我对这个事物或现象的基本看法
• 3. 赞成的理由因为其重要性(或反对的理由 因为其危害性) (更加具体的阐述自己的观 点)
题型分析
– 实例1 – 2012年6月真题 – Write a composition entitled On Excessive
opportunities to experience the physical world for his paralysis. What a pity!
说理 Without a good health, we can not travel or study, thus opening our mind and enriching our life.
• 结论
• For us college students, the saying / proverb has a profound and realistic significance; Just imagine how far can we make in our academic study, if we don’t have a strong body?
• Take Stevie Job, former CEO of Apple Company who died at the age of 56.
• 论点
• A good body is something through which we are able to experience the world.
第二段
• 论点 :
• 1. Health is the foundation of a quality life. Without a good body, the accomplishments we made, the relationship we kept, the social status we try hard to build will be completely useless.
• 例子 • A rich patient (出不了门的/坐轮椅的—
confined in a wheelchair/confined to his room)
•TaSkteevStieevwieoHnadwekrin/Sgtfeopr hexeanmHpalew. Akninigntellectual •giManyt afrsiehendiss,/tmheygsreelaft man undoubtedly misses
• From what has been discussed/mentioned above,
• To sum up,
范文1
• (第一段)As the saying goes, life that lacks health lacks everything. It means that health is of the topmost value in our life. I cannot agree with it more. (3 句)
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