I would appreciate it if you could help me.
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polish the passage
• plex sentences(attributive clause, adverbial clause, nonfinite verb and so on)
• e.g. I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.
He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.
4.Can you go to meet my uncle at the airport?
5.He will arrive at 11:30am August 6.
6.The flight number is CA985.
8.I have asked my uncle to bring you
the Chinese painting (that/which) you
Step 1 Identify overall
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requirements and list the key points（审题列要点）
个 Step 2 Form a passage
步 Step3. Polish the passage（成文润 色）
骤 Step4. Check the passage
3.李明的外貌特征 4.李华托李明带了一副Peter想要的中国画给他 注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________ __ Looking forward to your reply.
并列:besides, in addition, what’s more…
转折:However, On the contrary, but…
顺序:First of all, First/Second/Finally…
3. Politen. Send me the book.
• 8.我已经让叔叔带了你想要的中国画 给你 。(Chinese painting)
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1.I am Li Hua.请注意时态及人称和数的统一 2.I’m writing to tell you that…
3.My uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference.
(I am Li Hua.) I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport?
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• 1.我是李华。
• 2.我写信告诉你…… attend a meeting
• 3.我叔叔李明将去你的城市开会。
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4.
你能否去接机?
pick sb up at the airport
• 5.航班号是CA985(flight number)
• 6.他8月6日上午11：30到。
• 7.李明的外貌特征
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•三段法模式 ① 第一段：Purpose: Asking for help ② 第二段：Body: Situation ③ 第三段：Conclusion: Express your appreciation and hope
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常用句型： 1.写作目的： I’m writing to tell you that… 2. 求助的句型： I wonder if you could … If it is convenient to you, would you please…? Would you do me a favor to …? 3.表达期待或谢意。 Looking forward to (receiving) your early reply. I would appreciate it if you could help m15 e.
How to write a letter for help?
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Lead-in
What did Harry Potter say when he asked for help?
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Before writing:
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你 叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，询问他是否可以接 机。信中需涉及如下内容： 1.航班号：CA985 2.到达：8月6日上午11:30
Post-writing
Check your passage:
① 检查单词拼写、时态语态、名词 单复数、标点符号等。
② 检查要点是否遗漏。 ③ 检查句子结构是否正确。 ④ 估计字数是否符合要求。
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How to write a good letter for help?
Summary
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Conclusion:
He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.
• e.g. How to make Peter find my uncle easily?
uI will send you the picture of my uncle. uMy uncle will wear a red hat that day.
Attention: It’s unnecessary to write too much. If you can’t make it reasonable and realistic, don’t write it down. 10
want.
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While writing
1.Paragraph：
① Para 1：Purpose: asking for help ② Para 2：Body: situation ③ Para 3：Conclusion: express your hope
and appreciation
2. Linking words or sentences:
7. I wonder if you could send me the book.
8.Would you do me a favor to send me the
book?
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(I am Li Hua.) I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport?
2. Could you please send me the book?
3. I hope you can send me the book as soon as possible.
4. I would appreciate it if you could send me the book.
5. You should send me the book .
• 2.advanced vocabulary
• e.g.: want
be fond of
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• 3.invent some realistic and reasonable information: ask yourself some questions according to the passage
I would appreciate it if you could help me.
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Homework
Polish your composition after class and share it with your deskmate.
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Thanks!
Goodbye!
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