看图类作文第一段:简单描述漫画,揭示漫画实质第二段:分析造成该现象的原因或影响(主体部分)第三段:从个人角度提出建议1. 描述漫画:As is vividly depicted in the carto on give n above, we can observe that 或As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see that .....或As we can see from the picture, …2. 描述漫画本质/内涵Appare ntly, the picture reflects/reveals that .....或The carto on in forms us of the phe nomenon that ............3. 出现的问题或现象的原因(或者导致的影响) :原因 (1.We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. First, .Sec ond, . Third, _____ .(2.Reas ons for ....... are in abun danicerhe reas ons for this phe nomenon are asfollows. Firstly, ___ . Sec on dly, ___ . Thirdly, ____ .(3..There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______________ . Onthe one hand, ___________. On the other hand, _____________ is due tothe fact that ___________ .影响:(1..What contributed to these changes? I think the reasons are as follows. To start with, ④_____ . Sec on dly,⑤_____ . What ' s mc@, ________ . Last but not least,⑦ ________ .(2.So far as I ' moncerned, I believe that such phenomenon will give rise to a series of consequences. First and foremost, it will exert a far-reaching / negative impact on 、、、;Besides, it may bring about a considerable change/damage to、、.One more point that can ' t be ignored is、、t .4. 个人观点(提出措施/建议):Therefore, immediate measures should be take n to ….To beg in with, .......What' s more, ........ . Last but not least, ....或It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...或It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...或To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...From what has bee n discussed above, we can draw the con clusi on that ...或In conclusion, it is imperative that ...或In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.或With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.或We might do more than identify the cause ;it is important to take actions to ...或Taking all these into account, we ...或Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certa in /clear...或Given all the above factors, it is safe tcreach the conclusion that … 或Taking into acco unt all the above factors, it is reas on able to reach the con clusi on that …模板:It seems to me that the cartoon / drawing is sending a message about (图画内容),which reveals___________________________ (稍作评价)There are at least two good reas ons acco un ti ng for _____________ . For one thi ng, ___________ (从社会角度论证).For ano ther thi ng, ___________ (从个人角度说明).For example, ____________ (自己、朋友或他人,只要自己知道或听过的例子).Last but not least, ____________ (从反面角度谈论).As a result, the drawer of the illustrati on is urgi ng us to ___________ (建议或措施).Only in this way can we ____________ (展望结果)」n conclusion / To my understanding, _____________ (再次表明观点或态度).We should_____________ (进一步说明个人的观点).基本要求1. 文章是否扣题,结构是否完整;(抓住实质)2. 内容是否充实,健康;3. 语言是否准确1)句式的多样性:定语从句,非谓语,强调,倒装句。
高级词汇2)不只看单句,要看前后句的连贯性和逻辑。
3)得体(前后语言风格,词汇层次)写作1简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
写作1This picture prese nts a ridiculous see ne in a typical on e-child family in Chi na. The parents are trying to persuade the little boy to cat, but the boy asks his father to act as a horse. He is riding on his father's shoulder and saying “You run a circle and I'll have a mouthful of food. ” The mother,holding a bowl of food,is running after them,ready to feed the little boy.This picture shows that some childre n are terribly spoiled by their pare nts. Due to the one-child policy,most Chinese families have only one child. The parents try their best to satisfy every need of their child. As a result,the spoiled child becomes the “ little emperor" who rules the whole family .Children are the future of our country. If they are so lazy and so selfish,there win be no hope for our country.Parentsshouldmake every effort to prevent their children from getting into bad habits. They must be strict with their children and refuse to satisfy their un reas on able dema nds. On ly in this way can they expect their childre n to be good citize ns whe n they grow up.:简要描述漫画内容,结合生活实际,就漫画主题谈谈自己的感想仕WE衣This carto on is silly, and yet compelli ng: a large customer holds a hopelessly small piece of cloth as the tailor carefully measures. Such an image suggests that one n eeds to con sider practical reality in the pursua nee of goals. Merely acting on one's desires, while ignoring the facts at hand, cannot lead to success.The fact that currently there are more graduates than jobs reminds us of theimportance of rational thinking. Every year approximately 3 million studentsgraduate from universities and begin looking for work. Many of them fail to find suitable employme nt because there are simply not eno ugh opport un ities toaccommodate such great numbers of graduates. In addition, however, one might also cite flawed in dividual assessme nt as a reas on.In order to create a realistic target for one's future, one must make rati onal decisi ons and prepare accord in gly. A stude nt who aims to be a surge on, for example, must take care to acquire opport un ities to do cli ni cal practice and gain sufficient knowledge. In other words, customers would do well to takeaccurate measurements before purchasing their fabric. A small piece of clothcannot adequately clothe a large pers on.:简要描述漫画内容,结合生活实际,就漫画主题谈谈自己的感想。