如何写好主题句2007年高考以来读写任务的“写作内容”都是三个要点, 三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点,不会离题,又显得层次清楚,能让阅卷老师一目了然。
段落的主题句其实就是一句过渡的话, 用来表达观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的经历,使上下文衔接得更加紧密。
◆主题句的定义:段落主题句就是全段的核心,统帅全段,并决定全段的发展方向。
全段其他句子都是围绕主题句,对其进行说明、支持或扩展的,这些句子称作“扩展句(supporting sentence)”。
◆主题句的模式:1.说出感受(1)你读信后的感受(2012广州一模)I appreciate what you say and sorry to have caused you so much worry.I’m also touchedthat .....(2) 你读完这个故事后的感受After reading the passage,I was deep in thought .....(3)你读完这篇演讲稿后的感受(2011广州一模)After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student who .......可以套用的模版:1.After reading the passage,I was shocked and at the same time I felt sorry for ......2. After reading the passage,I'm really moved and learn a lot from .....3.From the story, we learn that .......4.I was deeply moved by........ It made me realize .........实战演练:(1)Tom来信说他现在学习压力大,请谈谈你读信后的感受。
(2)吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被评为“最美妈妈”,请谈谈你对此的感受。
.2.引出经历(1)讲述一次想家的经历(11广东)Like Sam, each of us may have the experience of missing our family, me included. (2). 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。
This reminds me of an unforgettable experience of my part-time job. I once had an experience of doing a part-time job in a summer vocation .(3)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师(2012年广东高考)After reading this story,it suddenly reminds me of my respectable teacher MissWang,an English teacher who always carries a big smile on her face.可以套用的模版:1.The story reminds me of ......2.The story reminds me of my personal experience.3.Taking_the_example_of_me,_I think it's not bad for Chinese parents to learn to be a little “westernized”!以我为例,我认为中国父母适当西化也是不错的事情。
4.There_are_some_examples_in our daily life, among_which_is the wasting of water.在我们的日常生活中有很多这样的例子,浪费水资源就是其中一个。
5.There_are_many_examples_to_show_that success comes from hard work. One_example_is_that 有很多例子能够证明.........。
其中一个例子就是........实战演练:(1) 你或你同学的留堂经历。
(2011佛山一模)(2) 假如你读了一篇关于“持之以恒”的文章,用你自己或他人的经历说明持之以恒的重要性。
3.直接回答题干是问句或含“是否”的句子,可直接回答,作为主题句(1)你是如何处理压岁钱的?(2012佛山二模)Unlike the the boy, I can take charge of my own lucky money.(2)你是否赞成文中对出国游的看法?(2012广州二模)I can't agree more with the author.(赞成)Though expensive,I still think study tours are worthwhile.(3)假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应?(2009广东)If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.可以套用的模版:1.As for me,I can’t agree more that... 就我而言,我非常赞同.......2.As for me,I disagree that...3.If I were the boy, I would keep contact with the tree and be considerate.实战演练:(1) 假设你当时就在事故现场,你是伸出援助之手还是袖手旁观?(2010茂名二模)(2)你是否赞同作者的观点?(3)你从故事中学到了什么道理?(2009广东二模)4.复述内容这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问,而是翻译要点作为段落的主题句,例如,要点是“谈谈……的重要性”,主题句则为“……有重要作用”,要点是“谈谈……有何重要意义”,主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。
(1)中学生活和大学生活的差别(2008广东)From my point of view, college life will be different from the life in high school.(2)建设绿色校园的重要性。
(2011东山中学)It is of great importance to build a green campus.(3)你的父母是如何鼓励你学习的?(2010广东)My parents used to encourage me like this.可以套用的模版:(1) Sth.is necessary to sb.(2) It is important/significant for sb.to do sth.(3) Sth.plays a very important role/part in...(4) Sth.is playing an increasingly important role in our life.(5) People are coming to realize the importance of...(6) The significance of...cannot be overvalued.实战演练:(1)网络的普及给青少年带来的利弊。
(2)掌握急救知识的重要性。
5.引出建议、原因、方法、措施、步骤等(1) 你有什么建议给文中的小男孩?(2012佛山二模)As for the boy, I suggest that ......(2) 你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施?(2011东山中学)In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken.(3) 越来越多人开始骑自行车的原因。
Nowadays,more and more people ride bicycles. The main reason is that ........实战演练:(1)你认为应该如何应付考试紧张?(2)我们为什么要遵守规则制定?6.明示观点明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同。
1.你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。
(10广东)As far as I am concerned,I am not in favor of the measure of paying students to study. 或者I am strongly against (我不支持) encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks.2.你对中学生博客的态度。
(11广州调研)As for myself, I support student-blogging.3.你是否赞成推迟高中早上的上课时间。
(10佛山一模)In my view, I can’t agree more with the idea to delay the opening of the school day of Senior School.可以套用的模版:1.In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.2. As far as my knowledge is concerned, ...... 就我所知,实战演练:(1) 你对考试作弊的看法。
(2011揭阳二模)(2) 你对高中生带手机到学校有什么看法?(3) 你对失败的看法或态度。
(2009汕头一模)【Practice 1】请根据各个写作要点,写出主题句。
(1)Tom 来信说他现在学习压力大,请谈谈你读信后的感受。
_______________________________________________________________________________ (2) 你或你同学的留堂经历。
(2011佛山一模)_______________________________________________________________________________ (3)你是如何处理压岁钱的?(2012佛山二模)_______________________________________________________________________________ (4)你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法?(2012广州二模)______________________________________________________________________________ (5) 你从故事中学到了什么道理?(2009广州二模)_______________________________________________________________________________ (6) 中学生活和大学生活的差别。