（二） In the summer holiday following my
eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard the first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, but once I started the car, my mind went blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the words. “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!” I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes later, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle of the road.
1.将eighteen替换为eighteenth 2.在first之前添加the或者my 3.将so替换为but 4.将goes替换为went 5.将word替换为words，word表示说的话/话语/ 言语时是可数名词，其复数形式是words 6.将Turning替换为Turn 7.将much删除 8.将late替换为later，late为形容词，意为迟的， 晚期的。later既为late的比较级，也可做时间 副词表示“随后，稍后”。
change there. The first time I went there, ftohuenyd were
__ living in a small house with dogs, ducks and another __ animals. Last winter when I went here again, theoythheadr __ a big separate house to raise tdhoezreens of chicken.
9.将suddenly替换为sudden 10.将middle后的on替换为of，in the middle of 表示“在……的中间”。
三. 练习之改错再现
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
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They also had a small pound which they raised fish.
My grandpa said last summer twhheeyreearned quite a lot
__ __ by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had
二．短文改错。（文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有
两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改）
(一)
During my last tryside
^ _ with my father to visit my grandparents.thIefind a big
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
考查目标
1.识别错误，并正确校正语篇 的能力； 2.综合运用英语知识的能力； 3.准确理解语篇，掌握内容及 行文逻辑的能力。
一. 短文阅读
(一) During my last winter holiday, I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks and other animals. Last winter when I went there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chickens. They also had a small pound where they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by selling the fish. I felt happy that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, and he agreed.
Summary
高考短文改错应试策略及答题原则
（一）五不改：1. 标点符号不改；2. 大小写不
改；3. 词序错误不改；4. 单词拼写不改；5. 短文 意思不改。
（二）三步走策略: 通读全文，把握大意； 细
读全文，仔细斟酌； 再读全文，复核审查。
（三）题型出现形式：多词，缺词或错词；
错误比例：2:1:7 或1:1:8
短文改错小结
1.句为单位来改错，连冠缺误搞明白 2.整体逻辑前后顾，时态非谓定记住 3.形副介词看搭配，六个一致要用对。
六个一致：主谓一致，名词单复数
一致，代词指代一致，时态语态一致， 非谓语动词与逻辑主语一致，行文逻 辑关系一致。
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附录：
1.将close to 后的that改为where 2.Though和but不能同时出现，应删除 第二句中的but 3.第四句中的had改为have 4.将honest改为honesty 5.将第六句中的or改为and 6.将using改为used 7.dreams 和 becoming之间加上of， dream of doing sth意为“梦想做某 事”，dream about意为“梦见” 8. 将第七句中的the改为a 9.将第8句中的our改为his 10.将steady改为steadily
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