1. I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time. 十分抱歉我 不能及时回复您的邮件。 2. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我十分抱歉没有及时回信。 3. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次为我的错误真诚 地道歉。 4. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 错 过了在一起的机会，我感到很遗憾。
全国高考英语二轮突破
celebrate the precious moment 庆祝这珍贵的时刻 the final examinations 期末考试 be around the corner 即将到来 appointment 约会 accept sb. sincere apology 接受某人真诚的道歉 a face-to-face talk 一次面谈 for my health’s sake 为了我的健康 keep to sb. word 遵守承诺 further one’s studies 进修；继续学习
8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you. 8. them改为it
9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didn’t get your text messages. 9. because改为so
满分赏析 ①第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。 ②I feel terribly sorry for …用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。 ③本段用了to start with, in addition, what’s more等连接词，使行文 连贯；not only…but also…也是必须学会运用的高级句型；broaden my horizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好的 印象。 ④It is a fabulous choice to…(……是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级表 达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。 ⑤最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表达了真诚的 道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。
【模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约】
作文原题 假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你 本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考 试，忘了赴约。请写封信向 Anne 表达你的歉意，说明原 因，并提出补救的方法。
作文翻译
亲爱的Anne， 我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。 你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵 的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘 记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你 在考试后进行一次私人的见面？ 我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。 你真诚的， 李华
满分佳作（二） Dear Tom, ①How is everything going? ②I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation. ③To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. ④In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life. ⑤I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? Yours sincerely, Li Hua
Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you. But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours truly, Li Hua
5. careless改为carelessness 6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.
6. apologize改为apology
7. I am really sorry, but I’ve lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June. 7. lend改为lent
满分赏析
④运用了 where 引导的定语从句修饰地点，使句式避免简单化； places of interest(名胜古迹)也运用得当，考生需注意积累，否则只 能生造出中式英语。 ⑤运用了There is no doubt that…(……毫无疑问)这样的万能句型；be badly in need of help(急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。 ⑥make a difference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。 本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？
满分佳作（一）
Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. ②I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. ③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. ④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number oБайду номын сангаас places of interest. Finally, I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer. ⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. ⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
3. terrible改为terribly
4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week. 4. very前面加am
5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.
1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness. 1. apology改为apologize 2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother. 2. so改为because 3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.