手把手教你写中考书面表达话题一校园生活(解析版）话题突破研究近5年全国中考书面表达试题可以发现,校园生活是中考的一个热点话题。
此话题主要从以下四个方面进行设题:1.学校的学习生活;2.学校的活动与安排;3.三年初中生活难忘的事;4.学校的安全教育及校纪校规。
主题一典型剖析(一）（2019年岳阳市）假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨提示。
忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以“Preparation for High School Ent rance Exam”（备战中考）为题，写一篇80-100词的短文。
1. 请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。
学习区Listen to the teacher生活区Eat healthy food提示区Avoid making mistakesTake notesExerciseLearn to relaxFinish doing…Have enough sleepBe on time………Preparation for High School Entrance Exam____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________教你审题仔细审读所给文字提示,可以提取以下信息:1.主题:介绍备战中考的时光。
2.体裁:记叙文。
3.人称:第一人称。
4.时态:一般过去时为主。
5.思路点拨:建议用三段式来写:第一段,引出话题——High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.第二段,主要从三个方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。
第三段,首尾呼应We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever.思路导图佳作赏析提分短语中考High School Entrance Exam 准备prepare for为了In order to 取得好成绩get a good grade记笔记take notes 同时at the same time.及时on time 详细地in details鼓励不要放弃encouraged us not to give up继续keep on感觉有压力feel stressful 小心be careful避免犯错误avoid making mistakes. 更重要的是What’s more感到疲倦和紧张feel tired and nervous,提分句子开篇句:中考就要到了。
High School Entrance Exam is arriving我还记得我们的老师和学生一起工作的日子做准备。
I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.结尾句:我们将永远记住准备高中入学考试的日子。
We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever.点睛句:为了取得好成绩，我们上课认真听讲，同时做笔记。
In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time.如果我们有一些困难的问题,我们的老师会祥细地解释给我们听。
If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.所有的老师鼓励我们不要放弃,继续努力学习。
All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying.老师告诉我们不要感到有压力，要学会放松。
The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax.⑤在考试中我们必须小心,避免犯错误。
We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.更重要的是,我们必须准时。
What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous.但是多么一个充实和快乐的时光!but what a full and happy time!主题一典型剖析(二）[2018福建中考A]假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。
请你根据图表提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节,感受中华武术文化。
词数80左右。
Time July 7 to 9, 2018Activities competitions,showsHistory of Wushu thousands of yearsBenefits(益处)…of Wushu注意事项:(1)必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇:practice Wushu练武Dear Henry,I am glad that you are interested in Wushu.Yours,Li Hua教您审题仔细审读所给文字提示,可以提取以下信息:1.主题:Invitation for the first Wushu festival。
2.体裁:应用文。
3.人称:描写对方时用第二人称,描写自己时用第一人称。
4.时态:一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅。
5.思路点拨:要点以文字和图表形式给出,信息比较多,不要遗漏。
其中练习武术的益处需要考生适当发挥。
文章可分三段:第一段点明主题,邀请对方来参加首届武术节,并介绍武术节的时间和具体活动,第二段介绍中国武术的历史以及练习武术的益处;第三段结尾。
思路导图佳作赏析Dear Henry,I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. Here I’ve got good news for you. ①The first Wushu festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. ②I’d like to invite you to the festival. You can watch many Wushu competitions and enjoy wonderful shows.③Chinese Wushu has a history of thousands of years. ④Practicing Wushu is a good way to improve our health. ⑤Besides, it helps us to develop a strong will. Most of us like it very much. 赏析:①使用is going to be held(一般将来时的被动语态),体现了扎实的语言基本功。
②使用would like to和invite sb. to短语。
③使用了短语a history of和thousands of。
④用动名词短语作主语,提升了文章的档次;a good way to do sth.的使用丰富了文章的表达。
⑤使用连接词besides,使衔接更自然,并且使用了help sb. to do sth.结构。
⑥使用look forward to doing sth.短语,表达了作者的期待。
I hope you will come and experience ChineseWushu culture.⑥Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Li Hua满分积累提分短语与某人分享……share...with sb.遵守学校规则obey the school rules远离keep away from坚持做某事stick to doing sth.相信我自己believe in myself做些有意义的事do something meaningful提分句子开篇句:我很高兴跟你们分享我们的学校生活。
I’m glad to share our school life with you.时间过得真快!How times flies!很荣幸可以给你们做演讲。
It is a great honor for me to make a speech for you.我认为遵守学校规章制度对我们来说很重要。
I think it’s important for us to obey the school rules.结尾句:总之,通过学习我们可以更多地了解世界。
In short, we can learn more about the world by studying.我们应该互相帮助,以共同进步。