三、高考命题“一点四面”下的写作素材1. 社会主义核心价值观对成功的理解如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。

请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation), 按要求用英语写一篇短文。

“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ” —Sir Winston Churchill内容要求:1. 你对该引语的理解;2. 你的相关经历;3. 恰当的结尾。

注意:1. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息;3. 词数:80左右。

练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I时态一般现在时, 一般过去时段落布局开头点题: 点明对引语的理解主题段落:用事例解释对这句话的理解结尾:再次深化自己的观点Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in(2)佳句:① So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.② Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我非常激动, 决定试骑一下。

一般表达:I was excited and tried my hand at riding it.句式升级:(so. . . that. . . 倒装句)我是如此激动以至于等不及要试骑一把了。

So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.要点2:回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。

一般表达:Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldn’t learn to ride a bike.句式升级(分词作状语, 虚拟语气):回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。

Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However,it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.50年后的地球假定你是李华, 现在某英文报社面向中学生征文, 题为“50年后的地球”, 请发挥你的想象力, 用英语写一篇短文, 向该报社投稿。

注意:词数80左右。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions.The environment then will be much better than it is now. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air. There will be lesspollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there. The rivers will be cleaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for people’s life, there will b e great changes. First, people will lead a more comfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later.2. 传统文化假如你是李华, 前天你收到英国笔友Kathy发来的电子邮件, 说她很想报名参加即将在当地举办的“汉语民歌演唱比赛(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活动, 但信心不足。

请你给她回复一封邮件, 内容包括:1. 鼓励她积极报名参加;2. 帮助分析参加的意义;3. 给她提几点建议。

注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I); 第二人称(you)时态一般现在时, 一般将来时开头点题:鼓励对方参加比赛段落布局主题段落:分析参赛的意义并提出建议结尾:再次鼓励对方参加比赛Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:to be held, talent for, sign up for, participate in, a much better understanding of(2)佳句①It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.②What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:事实上, 你不必担心输赢。

Actually, you ne edn’t worry about whether you will win or lose.句式升级(特殊句式)Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. 要点2:最重要的是, 通过参加比赛, 你能提高你的汉语(水平)。

Most importantly, you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.句式升级(主语从句, 表语从句)What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear Kathy,I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. What’s more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the contest. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinese folk music.I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友丹尼斯对中国功夫很感兴趣, 来信询问中国功夫的相关情况。