九年级Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.写作教学案（教师使用）【话题】叙述过去的事情( Narrate past events )【写作目标】学会运用一般过去时态和过去完成时态叙述过去发生的事情。
【课前任务】一、写出下列短语。
1、排队等候2、捉弄某人3、.到达4、穿衣服5、虽然6、.查明，发现7、用光8、.自愿做某事参考答案：1.wait in line 2.fool sb. 3.arrive in/at 4. get dressed 5.although 6.find out 7.run out of /use up 8.volunteer to do sth.二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。
1、生活充满了出乎意料的事。
Life is full of _________ _________.2、当我到达学校的时候，上课铃已经响了。
_________ _________ _________ I got to school, the bell _________ _________.3、吉姆昨天在我回家的路上捎了我一程。
Jim _________ _________ _________ _________ on my way home yesterday.4、那天我们很累但很开心。
We were very _________ _________ _________ on that day.5、我没吃早饭去上学。
I went to school _________ _________.参考答案：1.the unexpected 2.By the time, had rung 3. gave me a lift 4.tired but happy 5.without breakfast三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。
常用词汇：wake up, leave sth at home, go off, be late for, find ou t…经典句型：1. By the time I got up, my brother had already gotten in the shower.2. My alarm clock didn’t go off.3. Luckily, Carl’s dad saw me on the street and gave me a lift in his car.…【课中任务】读写结合一、A. 信息归纳阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。
One morning, I was going to be late for work, so I had to send kids to the sitter(代人临时看管小孩的人). I was so worried that I just drove like a crazy person. The kids were arguing with each other, which made me crazier. When I got to the railway tracks (轨道), I found some workers were repairing them, AGAIN! So I waited for a few minutes. Finally after staying there for about 10 minutes like a moron (傻子), I found I could get turned around in someone’s grass before me! Th en I got back down the road in the other direction. My son kept saying,“You are going to be late.” He had said that ten times !!! Then what happened? Yeah, a bird flew right and hit my windshield (挡风玻璃).It bounced off (弹回) and normally I would feel sad about this, but I was so busy today. My kids were all sitting there quietly and were afraid to speak. Finally my son said in a low voice, “Geez, I hope that bird is okay.” I couldn’t help but laugh.Information Card参考答案：1.send 2.were broken 3.10 minutes 4.be late 5.A birdB ．赏析找出上面材料中的好词好句。
Useful words : send, worried, crazy, find, …Useful phrases: be late for, argue with, wait for, be afraid to, in a low voice …Useful sentences: I was so worried that I just drove like a crazy person.I couldn’t help but laugh.…二、书面表达假设昨天你发生了一件糟糕的事情：7点半才醒，闹钟没响；不吃早餐就冲去学校；半路发现没带书包而回去取。
结果, 到学校时觉得可以赶上上课，却发现学校没人，才想起是周日。
请你按照以上情节描述你的经历。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。
1、写作引导：A. 重点短语 写出下列短语。
1、醒来2、发出响声3、冲去学校4、半路5、把书包忘在学校6、意识到参考答案：1. wake up 2.go off 3.rush to school 4.halfway 5.leave backpack at school 6.realizeB. 重点句型 根据汉语意思完成下列句子。
1、我的闹钟没响。
My alarm clock _______ _______ _______ . 2、我回去取书包。
I returned home to _______ _______ _______ . 3、我觉得我可以赶上上课。
I thought I could _______ _______ to my class. 4、我发现没人在家。
I found _______ was at home.参考答案：1. didn ’t go off 2. get my backpack 3. make it 4. nobodyA bad day How to deal with the kids She had to (1)_____________ them to the sitter.What happened to the road The railway tracks (2)_____________ and some workers wererepairing them. They stayed there for about(3)_____________.Her son was always saying she was goingto (4)_____________.(5)_____________ hit the windshield and bounced off.C. 写作技能指导本单元涉及的话题是“描述过去的经历”。
相应的话题作文以记叙文为主。
写作时要熟练运用过去完成时、一般过去时等时态。
常用表达有：①By the time I …, It had already…②At that time I suddenly realized that I had…D.写作思路点拨Ⅰ、引出话题→It was really a bad day.Ⅱ、叙述事情→When I woke up, it had been half past seven...Ⅲ、表达情感→What a bad day!2、实践写作（含小组讨论、改评修正、赏析作品）【我的草稿】【我的作品】【我的订正】3、参考范文It was really a bad day for me yesterday. When I woke up, it had been half past seven. My alarm clock d idn’t go off at all! I had to rush to the school without breakfast. Unfortunately, I found I had left my bag at home halfway, so I had to return home to take my bag. When I got to the school, I thought I made it to my class. But there was nobody there. Then I realized it was Sunday!What a bad day!点评：本文能正确使用一般过去时和过去完成时来叙述过去发生的事情,语言准确到位,叙述详细；首尾能够呼应；最后一句“What a bad day!”的运用,也使情感得到升华。
【课后任务】读写结合一、A. 信息归纳阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。
On the afternoon of October 13th, 2012 in Foshan, a two-year-old baby girl was playing in the street while her parents were busy working at their shop. But unfortunately, a truck went by and knocked into this poor girl. What's worse, without stopping to help the girl, the truck went over her, making this poor girl badly hurt.. In the next 7 minutes, another truck went over her, and 18 passers¬by just walked past without taking notice of the poor baby. At last, this girl was saved by an old woman who collected waste in the streets, but unluckily the baby girl was so badly hurt that she died at last.This event aroused harsh criticism (引起强烈批判) on the Internet. But why do people seem so kindhearted only on the Internet, but actually in the daily life we can hardly see them help each other? Lots of people made comments online: If you save someone who's hurt, he may say it's you who hurt him. You may have trouble when you do a good deed, because the law doesn't protect you.We really need to learn from other countries in such cases. For example, in Singapore, if someone does wrong to the one who helps him, he has to say sorry in public and pay 3 times the medical fee as punishment.Information CardWhere the story happened (1)________________.(2)________________.The number of people who walked away instead ofhelping the babyWho helped the baby at last (3)________________.What happened to the baby girl at last (4)________________.Where the event aroused harsh criticism (5)________________.参考答案：1.(In) Foshan 2.18 3.An old woman (who collected waste) 4.She died 5.On the Internet B．书面表达上周日，你们班同学集体参加了志愿者活动，去敬老院（nursing home）帮助老人。