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高中英语写作案例分析

高中英语写作教学案例一、引言写作一直是中学阶段英语教学的重头戏,同时也是问题存在比较多的地方。

通过近几年高中英语写作课的课堂教学实践,并结合高中学生在英语写作中所表现出的问题,我发现将过程教学法应用于写作指导中的效果更明显,尤其是应用于写前准备阶段,更有利于培养学生的写作兴趣、参与意识和合作意识。

过程教学法将写作大致分为三个阶段:写前阶段、写作阶段和文章修改。

这三个阶段是一个循环的过程,教师的反馈和指导一直贯穿其中,学生则应当不断地阅读自己的文章,结合教师的意见对文章进行修改。

俗话说,“万事开头难”,写作也是这样的。

写前阶段作为写作的初始阶段,对后面的整个过程起着至关重要的作用。

在这个阶段中学生应当考虑三个方面的问题:写作的主题、写作的目的以及文章的读者。

写前阶段的准备工作可以给学生提供充分的思考,让学生做到胸有成竹,动笔写的时候就会文思泉涌。

二、教学案例分析下面这个教学案例是实践中的一部分,这个案例中写前阶段的信息输入是选取了brainstorming这种形式。

(一)写作话题的选取为了更好的贴近学生的生活,我选取了一个与学生息息相关的一个话题:Freedom。

广州是一个大都市,学生们就生活在这样一个氛围中,对于不同学校的管理制度有不同的看法。

这堂课主要采取的是小组讨论发言的形式,将全班同学每四人分为一个小组,让每个小组先内部讨论然后再发言。

(二)写作话题的讨论目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理,学生对此看法不一。

请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。

(字数:150左右)我每提出一个问题会给大家几秒钟的时间思考,这些问题果然起到了抛砖引玉的作用,学生们开始变得活跃起来。

接下来是brainstorming时间,我要求学生大胆地把跳入自己脑海的关键词或者是短语说出来,不必考虑语法问题,也不必为发音不准确而难为情。

学生的思维是活跃的,最有创造性的。

以下是学生考虑到因素和老师的提示:第一段:有的同学认为:1.学校限制我们的自由.2.学生和社会接触少.3.学生的兴趣和爱好得不到充分的发展.因此…第二段:有的同学认为:4.学校是学习知识的地方.5.学生应该安心在学校里学习.6.学生缺乏自觉性,离开了老师,可能会….第三段:你的看法:7.呈现观点:赞成哪一方?8.说明理由/提出措施③Thinking of key points/phrases :1.Let the students work in groups of four to get the key words of each point orally.2. Ask several students to report their answers to the rest of the class. Present these key words and phrases to the whole class. (Point 7&8 is flexible, encourage students to express whatever they want to say freely. If they can’, Chinese is also allowed.④Forming sentences (pay attention to the use of conjunction)Ask students to say sentences one by one according to the points given.Three keys to improving your composition:A. Learn to use superior phrases.B. Learn to use abundant sentences.Change sentences : (Present some typical sentences written by the students to theclass. Ask students to use superior phrases or sentences to change the sentences) ⑴. In addition, students don’t have the ability to control themselves.→In addition , students lack the ability to control themselves. /In addition, students can’t manage themselves well due to a lack of self-control.⑵ They may play computer games and forget to study.→They may spend much time playing computer games instead of studying. /They may get addicted to playing computer games instead of studying hard.⑶ In school we should study hard.→ In school we should concentrate on/be absorbed in /devote our body and soul to studies.⑷ Keep students in school all day are bad for students.→It’s bad to keep students at school all day.⑸School is the best place to get a lot of knowledge, students should put their heart into their studies in school.→School is the best place to get a lot of knowledge so that students should put their heart into their studies in school.⑹Some students can’t behave themselves well but for teachers remind us.→Some students couldn’t have behaved themselves well but for/without teachers’help ./Some students can’t behave themselves well unless teachers remind us to do so .⑺Some students leave the school may do something unrelated to their studies.→Once they leave school, they may do something unrelated to their studies.⑻We can only enjoy ourselves when we have school holidays..→Only when schools break up can we enjoy ourselves.5. Fill in the blanks: Present the model one (without some conjunction )to the whole class, ask students to fill in suitable conjunction ,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it.Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom , and have little chance to get in touch with society .They are not able to fully develop their interests andhobbies ,______they have less interest in their studies.Some other think school is the best place to get knowledge _________they should put their heart into their studies.________, Some students lack the ability to control themselves ._______out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will affect their studies._________, it is necessary to keep students at school .________at the same time schools should organize various activities ______ students can enjoy their school life.(三). 反馈1. Let the students work in groups to correct each other’s composition and try tofind out as many mistakes as they can.2. Classify the typical mistakes.(四). 建议1. Remember as many words and phrases as you can .2.Have a good knowledge of language points.3.Practise more4.Recite good passages regularly.5.Do a lot of reading三、对教学的启示我在教学中尽量给出多种题材,让学生有机会接触到不同类型的话题,而在写前阶段的训练中除了常用的Brainstorming之外也会采用job list、free writing、图片激发、背景知识输入等形式来激发学生的想象力。

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