写作专题建议信
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题。
建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。
通常包括:
1. 说明写信目的。
2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。
3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
常用语块
1. 给某人提建议________________________
2. 如下________________________
3. 在做某事时遇到困难__________________________
4. 利用________________________
5. 向某人征求意见________________________
6. 制订计划_______________________
7. 认为……有用_______________________
8. 参加_______________________ 9. 听从某人的建议_______________________
10. 把……考虑在内_______________________
11. 得到改善________________________
12. 有所好转________________________
13. 依我看来________________________
14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你…… ________________________
15. 我建议…… ________________________
套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。
3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。
4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。
5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文)
Dear Roy,
I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.
Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn f rom the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible
Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll le arn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
课堂练习
假定你是李华,请根据所给材料,给Lora写一封回信。
要点如下:
1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。
2. Lora父母不同意的理由。
3. 你给Lora的具体建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Lora,
I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents don’t allow you to do so. I understand your situation.
I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps they’d like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Be sides, they may think you are too young to work. I think you had better have a talk with your parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.
Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua。