批改网高分表达一、短语，高分词组1. creating a green campus创建绿色校园2. enjoy great prestige in the world享誉世界2. is the essence of 是…的精华3. Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。
4. Undoubtedly毫无疑问5. Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。
6. Needless to say, a green campus includes...不必说7. Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。
8. make efforts toMeanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atm osphere for the sake of students’mental health.9. Work out 解决，实现10. Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性11. Rewind the clock 时光倒流12. In addition to this除此之外13. Go all out全力以赴(属于四六级经典高分短语)14. what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。
What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure .而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。
15. whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。
16. nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。
17. take advantage of利用，是四六级经典短语18. attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语19. take pride in 意为：以…自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒20. take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。
21. on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语22. far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。
23. may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground.我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。
24. it pays to 意为：...是值得的。
属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.25. not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak ofIt goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studyi ng abroad become more significant.A case in point,we can have it.On account of anaccident,he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.What's more,it is universally acknowledged that studying abro ad is of consequence.For one thing,on no account can we be indifferent to other's pai n since they might go through some surge.That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence.For the other thing,we may as well go all ou t to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of thei r hearts as well.Foryour information,it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a natio n,that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all,that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their go als.What,more提高文章连接性studying4.1When there is love,there comes hope.[修改][学习提示]易混词汇:affection,love,attachment均含“爱，热爱”之意。
4.2The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the darkness,telling a philosophy to us as to love.[修改][学习提示]易混词汇:lamp,light均有“灯”之意。
4.3As we can see,evidently,love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrou nding is,the brighter it will be.[修改][学习提示]易混词汇:enclose,encircle,envelop,fence,surround均有“包围”之意。
4.4The drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to think that has we ever attach importance to love surrounding us.[修改][学习提示]易混词汇:consider,think,believe,count,deem,reckon,regard均含有“认为”之意。
第4段5.1It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the lo ve become more significant.[修改][优秀词汇]whereas意思是然而…，是经典转换话题类词汇。
[学习提示]易混词汇:significant,important,momentous均含“重要的，重大的”之意。
[精彩句型]it goes without saying that意为：不用说...，很明显...。
类似的表达有：属于经典高分句型，(It is)needless to say(that)，It is obvious that，Obviously,...。
用得很棒！5.2A case in point,we can have it.[修改][闪光短语]a case in point意为：一个恰当的例子，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[拓展辨析]动名搭配have...it在语料库中出现过34次5.3On account of an accident,he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed.[修改][学习提示]accident表示“意外事故”。
注意与incident的区别。
详情点击[闪光短语]on account of意为：由于，属于经典高分短语。
5.4Without her help and affection,he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.[修改][闪光短语]高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。
[学习提示]易混词汇:plan,design,plot,scheme,project,blueprint,programme均含“计划”之意。
[闪光短语]take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 5.5What's more,the Brooklyn indeed light up the world,so do their love.[修改][闪光短语]what's more有助于提高文章衔接[闪光短语]what's more意思是另外，而且…，是经典补充类词组。
[学习提示]易混词汇:earth,world,globe均可表示“地球”之意。
第5段6.1As far as I am concerned,it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequen ce,while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege.[修改] [学习提示]易混词汇:acknowledge,admit,confess,recognize,concede均含“承认”之意。