The cartoon emphasizes a thought-provoking relationship between human being and nature.People nowadays have enjoyed an increasingly prosperous life in the wake of enormous social and economic development.Yet at the same time, the number of some valuable species is dropping precipiciously and facing to extinction.Admittedly, the problem correslates strongly with the social environment at large.TheChinese Academy of Social Science在写这些大写字母时候要注意写为斜体has justissueda report descriping the far-reaching consequences of this. But it goes futher than it.
你将修改后的抄到本子上，仔细地誊写新模板。你以后写作文就按这个模板来套，如果一些单词背不下来，就有道词典查下简单的单词来替换；但句式一定不能改变，首句也尽量不要改变。
As ispreciselyillustrated in the picture, a tumblerwaslaughing at a boy stumbled by a stone.It is explicit to reveal the connect between A and B. Simple as the image is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
1While stressingquickchangesof society, the imagehas displayedtheimportance of主题词from two aspects。2On the one hand, it is promotedbypractical needs of thefast-paced and profit-oriented world.3The spirit of Langpingis one example of the wisdom of practice, which is composed of many exercises and persistence.4On the otherhand,the practical wisdommay meet the academic criteria.5According to a report by David Vaux,a professor of Voctoria University in Australia, those who excellentin practiceare more likely to establish career.6Hence,practice has become indispensableelementsto reachthe goal of life-long learning.
成功品质——以实践为例
As ispreciselyillustrated in the picture, a tumblerwaslaughing at a boy stumbled by a stone.It is explicitto reveal the connect between主题词A and深层主题词B。Simple as theimageis, the symbolic meaningbehind it is as deep as ocean.
首句最好还是要点明你从几个方面来谈，这样评委一看才晓得你是有逻辑的，评阅人不会仔细地看你每句是不是真的递进逻辑，他们很重视连接词。
第二句，用了it is -ed by现实需求的句型，也是万能模板。
第三句，某事物就是主题词的一个例子，这个事物是由……组成的。
第四句，主题词的出现不仅有现实需求，还符合研究标准，也是万能模板。
The spirit our time calls for is one of advocating practice.It is an essential quality to make success in this fiercely competive society.Therefore, we should realize its value and strive to pursue it.Calling on the spirit of practical wisdom, we have to take some useful measures to avoid the scene that is mentioned above.消极的；如果是积极的，就把后面替换为Calling on the spirit of practical wisdom, we have to take some useful measures to advocate the professional developmentinpractice.最后一句需要有点亮点。A holistic form ofpracticewouldbe fostered, even withinthe dynamical situation.即使情况再动荡，我们也要培养一种整体的实践/主题词，万能模板。
Words in it reveal the implication of the drawing: while the tumbler never fall down, it won’t make a step faward for lack of practice（这种表述不好，很奇怪，而且正式英文没有中文冒号再描述的说法）. Apparently, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.every reader with conscience will feel intensely pained by the situation of
While stressing quick changes of society, the image has displayed the importance ofecological balancefrom two aspects。On the one hand, it is promoted by practical needs of thefast-paced and profit-oriented world. The spirit ofHarmony Development isone exampleshown in official document, whichis composed ofmankind improvement and natural protection.On the other hand, theneed of balancemay meet the academic criteria.According to a report byChinese Academy of Social Science,problems stronglyrelated with thenaturalenvironmentwould havefar-reaching consequences on social development.Hence,ecological balancehas becomevital elementsto reachthe goal ofharmony society.
Calling on the spirit of practical wisdom, we have to take some useful measures to avoid the scene that is mentioned above.It is an essential literacyto make success in this competitive society.A holistic form of practice would be fostered, even within the dynamical situation.
第五句，根据研究……你的句子沿用了，删除相对没有参加的compared后面，因为第二段够长了。
第六句，如果你第一段的第三局写了明显地，这里的句型就最好不要了。
According to a report by David Vaux,a professor of Voctoria University in Australia, those who excel in practicing are more likely to establish career,compared with those who do not.Obviously,practice has become indispensable to reach our journey’s road.
As ispreciselyillustrated in the picture,a man/hunter was aiming at a pretty bird with a gun.It is explicit to reveal therelationshipbetweenhumanandnature.Every reader with sensitive consciousness will feel intensely pained by thedangeroussituation.
下面我就用这个作文来改，来套上面的模板。