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高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT
想要写一篇高分作文,你还要了解评分标准:
第五档(很好):(21-25分) 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应 用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许 错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较 强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使 全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
书信类
书信文体包括三大类:1、单一应用文(只达到一个目的) 2、简单述说型(欢迎稿等) 3、功能混合型(一封信里可能达到好几个目的)
种类:建议信,申请信,感谢信,道歉信,邀请信,求助信,咨询信。 建议信开头:I'm writing the letter to offer you some suggestions/do you a favor. 申请信开头:I'm writing to apply for the job/position/opportunity. 感谢信开头:I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you. 道歉信开头:I'm writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. 邀请信开头:I'm writing to invite you to join the ...
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratinannel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
In 2008,I served as a Volunteer in the Beijing Olympic Games,therefor,I was equipped with adequate relevent experience and social skill.
2、知识类 例句:Once I won the sceond prize in the CCTV national English speaking contest.
建议信中间段:Here are several suggestions for you. 1.You ought to do sth. 2.You are supposed to do sth. 3.If i were you,I would do sth. 4.It's high time that you did sth.
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容,但段盖 所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。5.应 用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言、 基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6一10分)
二、Examing the topic (审题)
审题,先审内容:1.列提纲,主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数,要求字数的20左右。
然后审时态:确定主要时态,建议不超过2中,时态越 多,越容易出错。
再审人称:写作时,不要搞混人称。
最后审题材:看是议论文,书信,还是图标类作文, 每种题材有一定的书写格式。
罗列要点,在句子之间加上连接词 结尾段:Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.If there's anything else I can do for you,please let me know.
申请信中间段:I have confidence that I can handle the job well.As for the reasons,for one thing,...for another... 申请项目通常有:志愿者,支教老师,夏令营,记着等 申请理由:1、经验类 例句:Living in Seattle for half a year as an exchange student,I do well in English speaking and writing.
分析:18年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇 议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分 析,表明态度,作出价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回 来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一家人去餐馆吃饭,看了on-line rating,选择去了其中一 家,但饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。
不同题材常用句式:
图表作文:
开头:A survey on the topic of ‘ -----’ has been carried out which has aroused a heated discussion among.... 例句:Recently, a survey on the topic of ‘ whom do you turn to when in trouble’ has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students. 写作过程中,详细描述图表中的数字或百分比
江苏2018高考作文:
【写作内容】 1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象; 2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 【写作要求】 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 不必写标题。
我们来看下2018年江苏高考英语作文,它是一篇读写作 文,需要你先阅读材料,然后概括出一个现象,再针对消费 排名现象写一篇议论文,表明作者的立场,并说明理由。全 文用第一人称(I),时态用了一般现在时(may have,there is,tend to等),并且穿插了一般过去时(bought,tasted),简 单明了,不容易出错。
一、Features of Good English
Essays 一篇好文章有什么特点?
prehensiveness.全面性:包含所有要求内容。 2.Clean and neat.整洁性:书写工整,卷面整洁。 3.Differences.多样性:使用较高级词汇和语法结构, 句式多样。
4. Logic/Coherence.连贯性:逻辑清晰,上下文连 贯,恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词,使全文 流畅连贯,浑然一体。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个词重点,但 覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的 要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误
主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语 句间的连接成分,使全文结构 紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目 的。
然后写作者对online rating的看法,表明观点,注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
首先在概括要点时,本文要抓住要点,语言精炼。本文所给材料是描述某种现象,那么就必 须用概括的文字来说明某种现象,这篇文章做到了
第二步是提出自己的观点并加以论证。首先提出自己的观点,之后用论据来证明自己的观点, 结尾总结了要点,与自己的观点句相呼应,使读者对主题有深刻的印象。特殊句式和词汇用法也 已标出。这就算第五档作文。
求助信开头:I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no choice but to turn to your help. 咨询信开头:I'm writing to ask your some relevant questions. 告知信开头:I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.
of leadership. Being the team leader of our school basketball team,I get along well with my teammates,enjoying my
outstanding awards and a harmonious interpersonal relationship in my team. 结尾段:Hopefully,the chance would be offered to me.If so,Iwould devote all my effort and wisdom to your company/this activity.