高考英语短文改错真题第三部分,写作(共两节,满分50分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟(?);如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正;此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(,)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。

并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(?)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改1,陕西2006 Dear,Anish,Here,are,the,information,about,Manchester,University.,,,,,,,,76.,,,,, It,is,about,200,miles,far,away,from,London,and,it,,,,,,,,,,,,77.,,,,,, has,a,very,big,schoolyard.You,can,live,in,the,school,,,,,,,,,,78.,,,,,, or,near,the,school.They,have,all,sorts,of,course.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,79.,,,,,, I’m,sure,you,will,find,one,you,like,it.,I,know,you,,,,,,,,,,,,,80.,,,,,, are,particuiar,interestes,in,Human,Rights.,So,I,will,,,,,,,,,,,,81.,,,,,, see,that,there,is,anything,on,their,website(网址)。

,,,,,,,,,,,,82.,,,,,, I’ll,send,my,friend,Charlie,meet,you,at,the,,airport,,,,,,,,,,,83._____ _ When,you,arrived.You,mat,him,a,few,years,ago,but,he,,,,,,,,,84.______ Has,changed,a,lot,since,them,Both,your,aunt,or,l,ollk,,,,,,,,,,85.______ Forward,to,seeing,you,again.See,you,soon.Pat2,陕西,2007Are,the,years,you,spent,at,school,best,years,of,you,life? ,,,,,76(,_ ___Personally,,I,found,most,lesson,rather,uninteresting.,We,had,to ,77( ,____sit,at,our,desks,in,silence,and,paid,attention,to,what,the,teachers ,,,,,78(,____were,saying.,They,were,used,to,write,on,the,blackboard,and,ask ,79(, ____us,difficult,questions.,We,also,had,to,do,plenty,of,homework,,and,80 (,____hand,it,on,time.,We,had,to,wear,school,uniforms,and,obey,lots,of ,,, ,,81(,____,____rules.,I,left,school,as,soon,as,I,can,and,started,work.,I,read, books,,,,,,82(at,the,publie,library,,and,late,I,decided,to,attend,college.,Now ,,, ,,,83(,____I,really,enjoy,study,because,I’m,growing,old,and,know,what,I ,,,,,, 84(,____Want,it.,When,I,was,at,school.,I,was,just,the,wrong,age! ,,,,,,85(,_ ___3,陕西,2008John,Brown,is,a,London,taxi,driver,who,love,going,to,the,,,,,,,76.,l ovestheatre,.Last,week,his,mother,gave,him,two,tickets,for,a,play.,,,,,, ,,,,77.,,?,,,The,tickets,were,on,Sunday,evening.,Then,John,read,some,,,,,,,,,,,,,78., ,,,forreviews,of,the,play,,which,all,said,it,was,a,terribly,one!,He,,,,,,,,,,, ,,79.,,terrible,,,,,,wouldn’t,go,to,see,a,play,that,no,one,liked,it,,So,two,hours,,,,,,, ,,,,,,80.,,,,去掉it,,,,before,the,play,started,,he,left,the,ticket,on,the,back,seat,of,,,,, ,,,,,,,,81.,,tickets,his,taxi,,Perhaps,someone,who,wanted,?,,see,the,play,would,take,them .,,82.,,,to,,,,,,,.,However,,while,John,went,back,home,,the,tickets,were,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,83.,,when, ,,,,,,,,still,there.,In,the,fact,,there,were,four,tickets,on,the,seat.,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,84.,,去掉the,,,,,,,,,Someone,has,placed,another,pair,of,tickets,on,top,of,them!,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,85.,,had,,,,,,4,陕西,2009My,sister,saw,a,lovely,cup,when,we,are,shopping,the,other,day.,,,,,1 .,_______She,liked,it,at,once.,Then,she,bent,down,and,picked,^,up,to,,,,,,,,2 .,________look,at,a,price,on,it.,As,she,did,this,,lots,of,tea,splashed,on,,,,, ,,,,3.,________his,T-shirt!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,4.,________ ,,I,had,to,try,hardly,not,to,laugh,at,her,shocked,face!,My,sister,,, ,,5.________wanted,^,get,out,of,the,shop,as,fast,as,she,could,when,a,shop,,,,,,, ,6._______assistant,came,over,to,us.,It,w\asturned,out,to,be,her,own,cup,,,,,, ,,7._______that,she’d,left,on,the,shelf,by,mistake.,The,assist ant,was,clearly, ,,,,,8.______as,embarrassing,as,my,sister,,which,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,9. ,_______,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,for,I,just,thought,it,was,funny! 10______,陕西,2010 5Last,Sunday,morning，when,l,was,having,a,walk,in,the,park,near,my,home，I,came,across,a,crew,make,a,new,film,,,,,,,,,,1______ with,one,of,my,favourite,actor(I,didn’t,have,my,camera, 2______ with,me,at,that,time，but,I,rushed,back,home,to 3_______ ,get(Unfortunately，by,the,time,I,got,back， 4_______,they,have,finished,the,sce ne,and,the,actor,couldn’t, 5_______be,seen,everywhere(I,was,really 6________disappointing,and,about,to,leave,when,he,walked, 7________outa,building(He,was,right,there,in 8________,the,front,of,me!,I,couldn’t,believe,my,luck--not,only, 9________ did,I,had,my,photo,taken,with,him， 10________but,he,signed,his,name,on,my,shirt!6,陕西,2011Today,is,Sunday,.I′ve,been,in,Canada,for,two,months,.This,is,the,first,time,that,I′ve,been,away,my,family,for,such,a,,,, ,,,,76.,,,,,,,,,long,time.,With,the,help,of,Ka tia,,a,roommate,of,me,,I′ve,,,,,,,,,,,,77 .,,,,,,,,,soon,got,used,to,live,without,my,parents,around.,Katia,,like,,,,,,,, ,,,78.,,,,,,,,,,many,other,Russian,girls,,are,nice,and,lively.,We,became,,,,,,,,,,, ,79.,,,,,,,,,,friends,shortly,after,we,meet,each,other.,Although,her,English,,,,, ,,,80.,,,,,,,,,is,a,little,hardly,to,understand,,we,enjoy,chatting,and,we,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,81.,,,,,,,,,usually,talk,a,lot,about,our,own,family.,We’re,both,surprised,,,,,, ,,,,,82.,,,,,,,,,that,Chinese,culture,or,Russian,culture,are,so,different.,Now,,,,,,, ,,,,,83.,,,,,,,,,,we,are,planning,a,small,party,for,the,next,Sunday.,There,,Katia,,,, ,,,,,84.,,,,,,,,,will,introduce,me,to,some,of,her,friends,,one,of,who,has,been,,,,,,, ,,,,85.,,,,,,,,,to,China,several,times.,I,just,c an’t,wait.四川2008As,summer,vacation,are,coming,soon,,my,classmates,are,, 56.,_____ trying,very,hardly,to,get,train,tickets,to,go,home.,But,,,,,57._____I,have,made,up,my,minds,to,spend,the,vacation,far,from,,, 58._____ home,for,first,time,in,my,life.,My,parents,have,agreed,,,,, 59._____ to,visiting,me,,and,I,will,have,a,different,vacation.,When,, 60.____ they,came,here,,I,will,show,them,around,my,university,,,, 61.,_____ and,the,city,just,as,well.,I,have,decided,to,buy,them,,,,,,,62.,____some,nice,gifts.,It,will,be,a,big,surprising,for,them.,My,,,,63._____parents,have,done,a,lot,for,me,,and,I,think,it,is,high,time,,,64._____that,I,did,anything,special,to,express,my,thanks.,,,,,,,,,, 65._____ 四川,2009Three,men,were,fishing,when,the,angel,appeared,in,the,boat,,,, 66.,,,,,,,,with,them.,The,first,man,got,over,his,shock,and,politely,said,to,,,,, 67.,,,,,,,,The,angel,,“I’ve,suffered,by,back,pain,for,years.,Can,you,help 68.,,,,,,,,me?”,The,angel,touched,his,back,,and,he,had,recovered. 69.,,,,,,,, The,second,man,pointed,to,his,glass,and,asked,if,the,angel 70.,,,,,,,,could,cure,her,poor,eyesight.,The,angel,touched,his,eyes, 71.,,,,,,,, but,he,could,see,everything,clearly. 72.,,,,,,,,The,angel,then,turned,to,the,third,man,,threw,up,his,hands 73.,,,,,,,,in,fear.,“Don’t,touch,me!”,he,cries.,“I’m,on,disability,pay! 74.,,,,,,,,I,don’t,want,to,be,a,normally,person!” 75.,,,,,,,,四川,2010An,English,lady,was,finally,decided,that,she,really,should,66.__________learn,to,drive.,And,after,many,attempts,,she,past,her 67.__________ driving,test,and,told,her,husband,that,,to,celebrate,,he,,68.,__________was,going,to,drive,him,over,to,France,for,a,holiday.,But,69.,__________then,a,week,after,the,trip,,she,suddenly,announced,that,70.,__________they,wouldn’t,take,the,holiday.,“How,did,you,change,your,71.,__________mind?”,he,asked,her,by,surprise.,“Well,,it’s,all,because72.,__________of,the,business,of,driving,on,right.”,she,said,,“I,have,73.,__________been,practicing,for,three,weeks,now,,but,I,still,couldn’t,74.,__________get,used,to,it—in,fact,,I’ve,nearly,killed,three,peoples.” 75.,__________四川2011Tom,was,having,much,troubles,getting,up,in,the,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,66.,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,Morning,and,was,always,late,with,work..,His,boss,wanted,to,,,,,,,,,6 7.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fire,him,if,he,didn’t,start,coming,on,time,,but,he,went,to,,,,,,,,, ,,,,68.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,the,doctor,for,a,help.,The,doctor,gave,him,some,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,6 9.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,medicine,and,told,him,to,take,them,before,he,went,to,bed.,,,,,,,,,,, ,70.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,The,man,did,is,told,and,slept,really,well,,wake,up,before,,,,,,,,,,, ,,71.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,the,alarm,had,even,gone,off.,He,had,time,for,a,properly,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,72.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,breakfast,and,was,still,the,first,reach,the,factory.”,Boss,”,he,,, ,,,,,,,73.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,said,,”that,medicine,really,works!”,I’m,pleasing,to,hear,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,74.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,it,,”said,his,boss,”,but,where,were,you,yesterday?”,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,75.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,全国2007Dear,Grandpa,Thank,you,for,your,letter.My,school,is,organizing,a,basketball,team,andthere',s,just,a,chance,which,I,can,join,it.,I'm,little,of,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,76.,______course,,but,terribly,quick,and,bravely.,While,the,others,,,,, 77.,_______are,jumping,about,in,the,air,,I,can,run,under,my,legs,,,,78.,_______and,get,the,ball.,It,will,be,lots,of,fun,for,practicing,but,,,,, 79.,_______in,the,playground,in,the,afternoon,with,the,tree,,,, 80.,_______ around,us,all,red,and,yellow,and,everybody,laughing,,, 81.,_______ and,shouting.,These,are,the,happier,girls,I',ve,ever,,,,,,,,82.,_______seen,and,I',m,the,happiest,in,all!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 83.,_______I,meant,to,write,long,letter,and,tell,you,all,the,, 84.,_______things,I',m,doing,at,school,,but,the,bell,was,ringing, 85.,_______ so,I,just,have,to,stop,here.Love,Judy全国,2008If,I,have,the,honor,to,be,chose,to,work,for,the ,76.,___________29th,Olympic,Games,,I,will,at,first,improve,my ,77.___________ English,so,that,I,can,talk,easily,about,foreign,visitor. ,78.,__________ _Second,,I,will,learn,more,about,history,of,the ,79.,__________Olympics,as,good,as,the,2008,Olympic,Games.,Third, ,80.,__________ since,I,was,familiar,with,Beijing,,I,can,help,visitors,find ,81.,___ _______their,ways,in,the,city.,Finally,,I,should,be,able,to,tell ,82.,_____ _____visitors,about,our,history,and,culture,and,show ,83.,_________ them,their,great,achievements.,In,short,,I,will,do ,84._________ my,best,to,help,making,the,Games,a,success. ,85.,_________全国,2009Hi,Susan,I’m,sorry,that,I,wasn’t,abl e,to,return,to,your,,,,,,,,,,,,,,76____ __bike,on,time,yesterday.,I,mean,to,give,it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,77______ back,to,you,before,four,in,the,afternoon,,and,I,,,,,,,,,,,,,78______ was,hold,up,on,my,way,back.,Just,before,I,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,79______ turned,corner,of,Park,Street,,I,happened,to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,80______ see,an,accident.,A,little,girl,was,hurt,and,her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,81____ __mother,needed,help.,So,I,helped,them,going,to,,,,,,,,,,,,,82______ the,nearest,hospital.,I,stayed,here,for,one,and,,,,,,,,,,,,,,83_____ __a,half,hour,and,made,sure,that,the,girl,was,all,,,,,,,,,,,,,,84_____ _right.,When,I,got,back,,it,were,already,6,pm.,I,,,,,,,,,,,,,85______ _hope,you,understand.Thank,you!Li,Ling全国,2010Christine,was,just,a,girl,in,one,of,my,class.,I,,never,knew,much,abo ut,Her,except,for,that,she,was,strang,.,she,didn’t,talk,many,.her,hair ,was,black,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,muchand,purple,,and,she,worn,black,sports,shoes,and,a,black,sweater,,alt hough,,in,the,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wore,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,even, summer,.she,was,,infact,,rather,attractively,,and,she,never,seemed,^ care,what,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,attractively,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,to, the,rest,if,us,thought,about,,her,.like,the,rest,of,my,classmate,,I, didn’t,really,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,classmateswant,to,get,closest,to,her,.,it,was,only,when,we,did,their,chemistry ,projiect,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,close,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,our,together,that,I,,begin,to,uanderstand,why,christine,,dressed,the,wa y,she,did,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,begin,,,,,全国,2011It's,been,a,week,after,we,left,your,family,and,we,are,now,,,,,76.___ ____back,home.,Thank,you,very,much,for,showing,them,around,,,,,,77._____ _your,city,and,providing,us,for,the,wonderful,meals.,After,,,,,,,,78. _______we,said,goodbye,to,you,,we,went,to,Washington,D.C.,,,,,,,,,,,,,79.__ _____where,we,stayed,for,three,days.,My,brother,was,so,much,fond,,,,,80._ ______of,the,museums,there,that,he,begged,my,parents,to,staying,,,,,,,,81( ________another,couple,of,day.,However,,my,father,had,to,return,to,,,,,,,,82 .________work,on,Monday,so,we,fly,back,last,Saturday,afternoon.,It,,,,,,,,83( ________was,really,a,nice,experience.,If,you'd,like,to,make,trip,to,,,,,,,,, ,84._______our,city,some,day,,I,will,be,better,than,happy,to,be,your,guide.,,,, ,85._______Yours,Mike。