高分作文的三个特征:1、内容要简单。
2、结构要清晰。
3、语言要精彩。
书信作文的写法【分类】申请信建议信感谢信道歉信告知信邀请信求助信咨询信非主流书信【套路】开头段:问候、自我介绍、写信背景、写信目的中间段:具体问题+具体分析(T-D 结构)结尾段:补充说明+客套话开门见山说意图咨询建议123不同内容可分段感谢客气不可少期待回信成老套【套话】1、开头段写法:(1)问候:How are you doing?(生熟)/How is it going?(熟人)(2)自我介绍:I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school, who is fond of/is crazy about…(3)写信背景:Recently, I learned that…/ I heard…/ I learned in your newspaper …/our teacher told me that …/I learned in yourmicro-blog that…(4)写信目的:So, I am writing to do sth. / Now, I am writing to do sth.申请信:So, I am writing to apply for the position/opportunity. 建议信:So, I am writing to give you some suggestions.So, I am writing to give you a hand(帮你一把). 感谢信:So, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you. 道歉信:So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. 告知信:Now, I am writing to tell/inform you some details. 邀请信:So, I would like to invite you to be our guest嘉宾/judge裁判. 求助信:So, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor. So, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.咨询信:Now, I am writing to ask you for some detailed information. 非主流书信:视情况而定,有时不写“写信目的”。
2、中间段写法【申请信】There are several reasons why I am fit for the position. 1,2,3,4…【建议信】Here are several suggestions for you.【感谢信】Whenever I recall those days, I just can’t help thinking of you. It was so kind of you to do sth1. Besides, you did sth2, which really moved me. What’s more, you also did sth3. Nothing would be able to erase our wonderful memories and I will cherish them forever.【道歉信】(为过去/将来道歉)How I wish I had done/would do sth1! However, I was/am chosen/ordered/required/asked to do sth2, which really means a lot to me, in that (写出sth2到底多重要). So, I have no choice but to break my promise(食言). I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. Hopefully, you would accept my apology and understand my situation.【告知信】To begin with,… Besides,… What’s more,… Finally,…【邀请信】Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, …Besides, … What’s more,… Finally,…【求助信】To begin with, would you be so kind as to do sth? Besides, I wonder if it is convenient for you to do sth? What’s more, I also need you to do sth. Finally, can you do sth?【咨询信】To begin with, would you be so kind as to tell me sth? Besides, I wonder if it is convenient for you to tell me sth? What’s more, Ialso need you to tell me sth. Finally, can you tell me sth?3、结尾段写法(1)Hopefully ,you would do sth.(2)Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.(3)Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.(4)Please drop me a line or send me a text message to let me know your decision soon. (5)I am looking forward to your reply (at your earliest convenience).4,过渡词(1)分两点拓展:TT. For one thing,… For another,….TT. On the one hand,…On the other hand,…(2)分三点拓展:First and foremost,….首先的也是最重要的一件事儿是, …Additionally, …./ In addition,…更进一步而言,….Last but (certainly) not least,…最后的但当然不是最不重要的是, ….(4)分四点拓展:To begin with, … Besides, … What’s more,… Finally,…(5)另起一段、改变主题时:By the way,….【注意】只要翻得通,最好每句话都带上过渡词!5、遣词造句(1)遣词升级方法:i. 换词法should → sb had better do sth建议sb ought to do sthsb be supposed to do sthWhy not do sth?It is wise of you to do sth.It is high time that you did sth.真的到了你该做某事的时间了。
If I were you, I would do sth.如果我是你的话,我就会做某事。
like → sb + be fond of sb + be crazy about sb + have fall en in love withwant → sb + would like + to do sth. 想要做某事sb + desire to do sth 渴望做某事unforge tt able 难忘的+ 一件事/人bad → terrible + 人/事/物tiring 令人疲惫的annoying 令人烦恼的boring 无聊的difficult → of great difficulty有难度different → of great difference有区别beautiful → of great beauty有美感useful → of great use有用处ii. 添词法{1}名词前面添加一个或多个形容词I have a kind , patient and considerate mom. English is a useful , essential and entertaining subject.I read a meaningful , educational and entertaining book yesterday. {2}名词后面写一个同位语。
We middle school students ….teenagers ….English learners….eg. We should learn English.We teenagers are supposed to master English, a useful, essential and meaningful language. {3}能并列时需并列。
You should understand your mom. →You should understand, respect and appreciate your mom. 理解尊重感激(2)造句升级方法:i. 黄金圣衣句型(加强语气、凑字神器){1}It is clear that… 很明显“清”{2}It is obvious that…. 很明显“明”{3}There is no doubt that… 毫无疑问“疑”{4}No one can deny … 不容否认“否”{5}Needless to say,… 不用说“不用”{6}It goes without saying that… 不用说“走”ii. 白银裤衩句型(“…”表示“完整的句子”) {1}..., for…. 因为…{2}…, considering that…因为…{3}…, in that…因为…{4}…; consequently,…所以…{5}…; therefore,…所以…{6}…; as a result,…所以…{7}…to do sth.为了去做某事{8}…in order to do sth.为了做某事{9}…so as to do sth为了做某事{10}… so that…以便…{11}… as long as…只要…{12}…,which …这件事儿…句型:It has been + 多长时间+ since + 过去某时间点 .自从过去某时间点到现在已经过了多长时间了。