★中考英语作文评分标准
据标准答案和评分标准规定，英语书面表达的满分为15分，分4档评分：
第一档(13~15分)，符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，
表达清楚，语言无误。
第二档(9~12分)，基本题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，
表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。
第三档(4~8分)，部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次
结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。
第四档(0~3分)，不符合题目要求，整片表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。
（如果考生按照要求进行写作，逻辑清晰，语言表达比较好，有一些亮点的词语、句式，
就容易拿到高分。
而分数较低的考生，从作文中可以看出基础知识掌握得不好，语言平淡，
逻辑顺序较差。
）．
范文：
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
We are sorry to see so muchwaste in our school!We students often leave th e taps on after cleaning our hands,and leave lights on whenweleave.In th e classroom,weoften see a lot of paper is wasted.At the dining hall,wec an see food left on the tables after meals.
I think weshould save water and electricity.We should makegood use of o ur school things.Don't throw food away.Let's try to makea good habit and save things around us.Let’s do it from nowon!
Class1,Grade9
范文：
Dear MsLi,
How are you?
I have a lot of troubles these days.Every day I have a lot of homeworkto d o at school.I don't have enough time to sleep.I nearly have no time to
do sports.Myfriends and I can hardly find time to talk,or play together. When I get back homefrom school,I'm not allowed to watch TV,surf the Internet or listen to myfavourite music.I feel worried about them.I
don't knowwhat I should do.Could you please give mesomesuggestions?
Best wishes.
ZhangMeng
The person I'll never forget is myEnglish teacher.He's a tall ma n with thick glasses.Helikes sports and often plays football and bas
ketball with us.He's humorousand always makeshis classes lively and
interesting.He's kind but is strict with us.Henever allows us to pret
end that weknowwhat
wedon't know.Heoften tells us that it's no use memorizing newwords w
ithout understanding.MyEnglish has greatly improved with his help.
2010作文
请“is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；
2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
3．词数80左右。
Is fun
范文：
Cooking is fun
Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons.
First, it is a good way to show my love to my parents. Both my parents are very busy. So w hen I come back home early,I’11 cook for them. After they return，we sit together and enjoy the meal. I can see
them smile happily.
Second．It is a kind of creation. I always try to cook different dishes.
When my new dish is praised by others, I feel proud.
I like cooking. It brings me a lot of fun.
2011作文
刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。
他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢
琴家的梦想。
经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”（China’s Got Talent）的舞台
上实现了自己的梦想。
请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1．简要描述刘伟的经历；
2．谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示；
3．词数80左右。
开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.
范文：
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He
lost his arms in an accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his
feet. Fina lly he realized his dream in "China’s Got Talent".。