首先,我是抱着一个初学者的心态去一个字一个字写下这篇日志的,也算是对前一个阶段辛苦岁月的小小总结,目的是为了交流与沟通,学音乐的人总要在技艺上跟人比划两下子,至于其他领域上,如自觉稍有见识而发到网上让大家围观,也算是一个经验分享,我英语并不是很好,多有不足之处,请勿喷我!纵观近数十年考研英语大作文话题,据我愚见,无非就是讲“社会现象”或者“个人品质”的,大体可归为就这两大类,虽然2009年的大作文是写正反面的,但那算是十多年唯一的一次例外——这里同志们可自行查阅历年真题去知晓,不一一提及,2013年也算传统(考到了“选择”这一主题)。
2013年的英语一大作文可以写成社会现象也可以写成个人品质,当然鄙人把其归为写个人品质的类别中去写作的,分数嘛,私下给你说,总之不很低调地发这么篇文章也是有些底气的~准备作文是从9月份开始准备的,当时并没有写过哪怕一篇随笔,于是听新东方网络课堂,下载了其讲义看其范文,又买了一些作文书(可觉得实际上并没有多大用处),还有在论坛上找到很多资料,筛检之后发现一位ID名字为“金翅”的哥们所总结的思路很好,下文有所借鉴。
于是开始效仿那些英语考70、80分的那些高手们、再博采众长、提炼细究、动手自己整理模板。
什么是模板?模板是作文的拐棍、是与谋取时间的翅膀、是让阅卷老师看到你诚意的艺术品!新东方的王老师曾说过,也许你考A类地区的北京、上海地区,那里的阅卷老师十分反感你的模板,但你报其他地区的学校,模板反而会让你笔下生辉、思路清晰、用最短的考试时间获得最大的利润,这就是模板作文给你的回报。
什么,你说你的英语水平为GRE,不用模板而写出好的文章来,那就另当别论吧,其实你可以不读研而直接出国深造。
以下是正文,鄙人用了足足两个月(去年10月到12月)的时间不断反复应用、修改、应用、再修改、再应用,两个月的时间内几乎每天都为某个句型的合理配置而有所苦恼、有所犹豫不定,模板不能说是改到极致、也算是我自己想当然中的精雕细刻吧,哈哈。
模板,一定要自己整理,就像我那样整理。
自己整理成功的模板,必定是独一无二绝无仅有的模板,此时,模板便不能称之为模板,而是你自己的东西,这就是收获、这就是积淀、这就是智慧、这就是创造。
既然研究生要求要有自己的独创性,那么考试期间,自己雕琢一篇属于自己的模板就不是在创造吗?下文为最终适用的版本,别笑,确实是最终考场上背熟后运用上去的,连去年十二月份的CET考试居然也能适用(我期待会有好的成绩,这次一定过了~)两个月的功夫让我最终整理了两大类模板——分别是“社会现象”和“个人品质”,遇到什么话题的作文首先归类,然后再运用,一般来讲英语一的同学只需要把图画的介绍打个草稿之后用关于这个图画的主题词或主题句找准就可运用;而英语二的同学一般得到的作文都会是图标作文,这个情况下把第一段的首句改下即可,后面两段一样照用,本文没有去作详尽赘述。
下面让大家观赏一下吧,希望有错误的地方能帮我纠正一下,觉得好的尽量不要照搬,觉得不好的也尽量别喷我~~~我写这个也算是祭奠一下我今天的心血来潮~~~首段(是什么):句一、(图画令人感到惊讶或发人深省时)I was profoundly shocked by what I have seen in this picture which is so symbolic and instructive./(图画正常时、不令人有惊讶感时)The (图画主题词或句)does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.句二、As is apparently demonstrated in the drawing above,we can see that(介绍图画、要抽象概括图画、不要具象到某人某物如何如何、要就事论事).句三、What a philosophic scene it is!中段(为什么):句一(1)、(当图画指社会现象时)Evidently,the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about that (坏现象时用negative)the negative influence of/(非坏现象时不用negative)the influence of______.(空格处填图画引出的主题词或现象的简述)句一(2)、(当图画指个人品质时)Evidently,though the compelling illustration,the drawer aims at reminding us that the significance of_____.(空格处填图画引出的主题词或现象的简述)句二、There are some reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typically ones.句三(1)、(当图画指社会现象时)Owing to the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening-up,a epitome of harmonious(和谐的)/ disharmonious(不和谐的)relation between the society and human being in a specific of(主题词或句)has been appearing.句三(2)(当图画指个人品质时)Owing to the miraculouseconomic better-off brought about by more thanthirty-year of reform and opening-up,(主题词或句)canbroaden our horizon,enlarge our scope of knowledgeand enrich our spiritual civilizations,句四、Moreover,according to the recent statisticsconducted by China Daily,the past decade has witnesseda sharp increase in the percentage of people whosupports(主题词或句)------from 38% to 76%. (本句借鉴论坛金翅大哥的句子,为亮点句,可以轻松抓住阅卷老师的眼睛,至于是什么媒体杂志、多少百分比自己可以根据图画事物进行合理调整)句五、(1)(好的社会现象)Undoubtedly,______to______(空格处填......对于......)just like fish need water tolive,just like bird need wing to live.(2)(不好的社会现象)Unfortunately,the nightmarewill knock our door if we turn blind to this problem.(3)(个人品质)Therefore we need(主题词或句) tosurmount the challenge,if a person lose (主题词或句),he can hardly attain success.尾段(怎么做——分社会现象与个人品质两种不同的尾段)(先上社会现象,如社会现象可用此段)句一、Personally,if lack (主题词或句) ,the crisis of (缺乏这个现象或者坏现象所带来的后果) will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses,and even the building harmonious society will become an empty talk.句二、There are some immediately measures that should be taken before it not too late.句三、On one hand,“eight honors and eight disgraces (八荣八耻)”advanced by HU Jintao should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of tradition virtues. 句四、On the other hand,it is the responsibility of the government,mass media to enhance people’s awareness of(主题词或句) as soon as possible,and at the same time,strengthen laws and regulations.全文末句、Only when those above-mentioned measures are carried out can we live a world dimensional,colorful,and vigorous.(再上个人品质,如个人品质可用此段)句一、Personally,we may safely come to the conclusion that(主题词或句) really count in this competitive society.句二、For one thing,we should strengthen our mind,which is the powerful impetus,to solve the problem,句三、For another,the educational campaign should publicized to enhance our awareness of cautious and patience.句四、It is said easier than done and practice is of utmost significance factor,全文末句、Only when those above-mentioned measures are carried out can we live a world dimensional,colorful,and vigorous.欢迎您的下载,资料仅供参考!致力为企业和个人提供合同协议,策划案计划书,学习资料等等打造全网一站式需求。