第一次作文错误类型分析第一次作文评分标准：长度40分内容20分结构20分语言20分主要错误类型：一、谓语动词方面的错误1. 主谓一致方面的错误1) At present,it iscommon that a family only have a children.2) It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school, and many student who seeks Cheating on Exams. is like one taking drugs who, once addicted to it, does not know what else to do but to continue indulging in it ,I think it very dangerous to students.3) Any people who seeks Internet Friendship is like one reading a book who, once get in touch with it,will learn a lot.4) Firstly, cheating not only break the school rules but alse make a very bad influence on school spirit.2. 时态错误1) On one hand, the students who are accepted by the girl or boy they loved can be encouraged.2) They think that making friends online is just a waste of time and influence their studies .They may be cheated by the bad people online .They believed that get on with others is the most important .3. 语态错误（主动或被动）1) For helping children to be independent,parents should spur children on doing something that can accomplish by themselves.4. 谓语动词缺失或谓语动词多余1) The last one reason, if you cheating on exams ,you are break the discipline of the school, so you will be punished.2) Making friends in the internet is not only make us understanding the person from different country on the world, But also help us to understand the different culture and customs.3) What’s more, it’s reported that people who fall in love can help they to learn the responsibility.5. 动词及物与不及物1) On the other hand,network has a lot of unhealthy content, for example ,violent games,most of the crowd who sought online stimulation lack of resistance,this will bring the bad moon from the online stimulation to your life.2) So working more to grasp of what you learned instead of cheating ,and you will be proud of yourself in the future .3) On the other hand,some students would feel guilty if they become the last one,they would be laughed at other students and they would be blamed by their teachers.二、非谓语动词方面的错误1) Any one who seeks internet friendship is like one eating tonics who, once lacked it, does not know what else to do but to continue adding it.2. Once have a examination, they had no choice but to cheat on exams.三、词性误用1) Independent is significant for children to be adult.2) But there are also dangerous for us in it.3) Thirdly, it is benefit for us to communicate the experience in many fields,and we can learn their advantages to improve ourselves.4) However, do you know why students do their best to pursuit a high score?四、习语或固定搭配错误1) That’s very beneficial for us in many side.2) They spend too much time to surfing the Internet .3) Secondly, internet friendship expand our capacity to know a great deal of friends to some extents,ranging from primary students to university professor.4) In my opinion,cheating on exams is bad for education,more important,it make bad influence in student’s study.五、词汇误用1）They always get some false information to us so they can get some profits.2）In the time of our parents’ age, they c onsider that students should pay attention to the lessons, other than to find a boy or a girl friend.3）But do remember there is an unusual scenery you should pay great attention to, that is the love in the campus.4）It is generally believed that the students who cheat in the exams are unpardonable students, because they don’t learn hard and take bad means to pursuit high mark.六、逻辑关系不合理1. 主宾逻辑不合理1) Moreover, credit is of great importance to one’s development, once cheating on exam ,it will be attack st udent’s sence of credit,and causing a unfair competition between studenhts.2）Once finding people who we feel nice, the sincere desire we should give to, then to make a good Internet friendship try our best.2. 主谓逻辑关系不合理1）If be found, cheater must face the strict punishment and reducing their honesty.2）Everyone has their own advantage,through the internet to make new friend can learn from each other advantages.3）The internet gives you a opening world. You can make more friends. It also could increase your knowledge,to relax yourself have fun and kill time.七、断句错误1) Cheating on exams is a very bad thing which will bring some bad effects for you, such as, you will not pass the exam and more serious you will be punished, in a word, you will have a heavy price for it, so, It’s very wrong for cheating on exams.2) Along with the network popularization on internet friendship in our life is more common.3) Firstly,some people think that on internet friendship is benefical from us.with the information society development and improvement of people ’s living standards. it is important to communition with each other. It is conventant that we need not to meet with when we have a discussion.it is benefical from us that we can acqire acknowledge and improve ourselves,and so on.八、从句运用错误1. 从句结构不完整1) Any student who cheating on exams is like a thief steals something does not belong to himself .2) What’s more,if the student who cheating on exam be catched ,the student will be severely punished,and left a spot in their archives.2. 滥用从句1) During recent years, the topic of cheating on exams, which has aroused widely pubic attention.3. 从句引导词错误1）Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social problem. According to a survey, there are more students in college are chasing the thing what is called romantic.2）I think that is a beautiful thing what we must be experienced!4. 该用从句不用1）As for me, take the normal love for granted, it means I am looking forward to having an excellent girl study and live with me.九、中式英语1) On the one hand, the network is more and more popular in this world, there have many worth known friend in the internet.2) Now society , almost everyone online , Network brings benefits and convenient is very big .and somthing is the book can not reach .3) If really not so lucky, online has been deceived, I will also continue to trusting, this is a more than before vigilant and careful, because I believe between people and people need to trust each other.另外的常见错误：名词单复数、谚语引用错误、句首单词首字母大写、无法明白的句子。