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高中英语基础写作步骤--练习8

高考题型之基础写作（Basic Writing）1. 基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。

4. 基础写作评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Step 1 How do you do the Basic Writing?1.审题（得分的前提，一定要认真、细致）①审体裁、②审内容、③审时态、语态④审人称2.分解，组合信息点，找出关键词3.确定句型、连词成句4.组句成篇5.检查润色[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

▲写作步骤：第1步审题第2步分解组合信息点，找出关键字词1.上周日(我)和同学去西山野炊。

2.八点(我们)在校门口出发，步行到山脚。

3.(我们)半小时后爬到山顶，然后在山上欣赏美景。

4.（我们）照相，玩扑克，午餐，玩得开心。

5.午餐后，(我们)感到筋疲力尽。

(我们)下山回家。

第3步：连词成句1.上周日(我)和同学去西山野炊。

2. 八点从校门口出发，(我们) 步行到达山脚。

3. 半小时后(我们)爬到山顶，然后在山上欣赏美景。

4.（我们）照相，玩扑克，吃午餐，玩得开心。

5. 午餐后，感到筋疲力尽。

(我们)下山回家。

第4步：组句成篇_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________★第5步: 检查润色：增加恰当的连接词，使句子连贯通顺1. 时态是否正确2. 人称是否一致3. 是否用5个句子4. 是否漏掉必要信息5. 是否语句连贯▲如何使语篇连贯：恰当使用连接词A、表并列：and；but；or（或者/否则）；while（然而）；…B、表转折：however（插入语）；but；…C、表原因：because；because of；due to；…D、表结果：so；therefore；as a result；…E、表列举：such as；for example；…F、表时间：first；then；later；in the end；finally；since then；soonStep 3 采用不同的表达法，文章会更生动形象1. 我认为他很好。

①I think he is very good.②In my opinion, he is excellent.③Personally speaking, he is outstanding.④To be honest, he is perfect.2. 他每天花很多钱。

①He spends a lot of money every day.②He spends money like water every day.*Step 4 语法，句法高分tips——How to make sentences nicer?1、巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李林，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。

_________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________4、巧用强调句E.g. It was yesterday that I met him in the street.Step 5 Summary☆The steps of basic writing:1.审题2.分解，组合信息点，找出关键词3.确定句型、连词成句4.组句成篇5.检查润色Step 6 Exercise: Write a competition using the five steps假如上周六你在广州市少年宫参加了主题为“Protect Our Earth”的英语演讲比赛。

请根据以下内容写一篇5句话短文。

一、审题:1.文体---2.时态---3.人称---二、整合成5个中文句子:1、上星期六，我参加了在广州市少年宫举行的以“Protect Our Earth”为主题的英语演讲比赛。

2、我看书和上网查资料，准备演讲稿。

3、我荣获第三名。

4、通过参加比赛，我认识到自信心的重要性。

5、而且，只有不断使用英语，语言水平才能得到提高。

※参考词汇：参加--- take part in, participate in广州市少年宫---Guangzhou Children’s Palace英语演讲比赛---English speech/contest演讲稿---a draft for the speech查资料---look for information in the library and on the Internet_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文(1)September 8th, Sunday cloudyLast Sunday my classmates and I went to West Mountain to have a picnic. / First we set out at 8 from our school gate, and then we walked to the foot of the mountain. / After half an hour, we climbed to the top of the mountain, where we enjoyed the nice scenery. / Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time there. /_ However _, we felt very tired soon, so we went down the mountain and came home.(2)Last Saturday I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Children’s Palace，whose theme was “Protect Our Earth”. After I looked for information in the library and on the net, I prepared a draft for the speech. And to my joy, I got the third place at last. By participating in this contest, I understand that self-confidence is very important . Besides, I also realize that only by using English constantly can we improve our English .参考范文(1)September 8th, Sunday cloudyLast Sunday my classmates and I went to West Mountain to have a picnic. / First we set out at 8 from our school gate, and then we walked to the foot of the mountain. / After half an hour, we climbed to the top of the mountain, where we enjoyed the nice scenery. / Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time there. /_ However _, we felt very tired soon, so we went down the mountain and came home.(2)Last Saturday I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Children’s Palace，whose theme was “Protect Our Earth”. After I looked for information in the library and on the net, I prepared a draft for the speech. And to my joy, I got the third place at last. By participating in this contest, I understand that self-confidence is very important . Besides, I also realize that only by using English constantly can we improve our English .参考范文(1)September 8th, Sunday cloudyLast Sunday my classmates and I went to West Mountain to have a picnic. / First we set out at 8 from our school gate, and then we walked to the foot of the mountain. / After half an hour, we climbed to the top of the mountain, where we enjoyed the nice scenery. / Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time there. /_ However _, we felt very tired soon, so we went down the mountain and came home.(2)Last Saturday I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Children’s Palace，whose theme was “Protect Our Earth”. After I looked for information in the library and on the net, I prepared a draft for the speech. And to my joy, I got the third place at last. By participating in this contest, I understand that self-confidence is very important . Besides, I also realize that only by using English constantly can we improve our English .参考范文(1)September 8th, Sunday cloudyLast Sunday my classmates and I went to West Mountain to have a picnic. / First we set out at 8 from our school gate, and then we walked to the foot of the mountain. / After half an hour, we climbed to the top of the mountain, where we enjoyed the nice scenery. / Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time there. /_ However _, we felt very tired soon, so we went down the mountain and came home.(2)Last Saturday I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Children’s Palace，whose theme was “Protect Our Earth”. After I looked for information in the library and on the net, I prepared a draft for the speech. And to my joy, I got the third place at last. By participating in this contest, I understand that self-confidence is very important . Besides, I also realize that only by using English constantly can we improve our English .Step 1 Read aloud（美文欣赏）①Cholera is an infectious disease which is caused by eating or drinking something polluted by germs.②In order to prevent cholera, we should pay attention to the following in our daily life.③First, we should drink boiled water and make sure that the raw food is cooked thoroughly.④Second, we should wash hands often, especially before preparing food, eating food and after using toilet.⑤Besides, keeping the kitchen clean and keeping away from flies are necessary.Step 2 高考题型之基础写作（Basic Writing）1. 基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。

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