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建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。

问题包括:1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂canteenDear Principal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ______I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!Yours,Li Hua作文范文:Dear Principal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows.Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!需注意的词汇、表达:1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty(adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)price 价格2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品5.For one thing,……. For another,……6.make sb (not)do sth7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a longtime8.The kinds of food are few.表达食堂出现的问题:9.The prices of dishes are so high that many ofus can’t afford them.10.There are so few dishes to choose from,which is far from satisfactory. / which can’tsatisfy our needs.11.It takes us so much time to stand in line,which decreases our time of rest at noon.12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./nice.The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good.13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that alot of food is left and wasted14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a longtime.15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, whichleads to a severe phenomenon of wastingfood.16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health andstudy.17.It goes without saying that it will influenceour sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议:18.Improving the taste of the food is also a goodsolution to the problems.19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kindsof food.20.It’s high time that we took measures to solvethe problems.So it’s high time for us to take measures21.To solve the problems, I think the canteenshould set up a new figure(形象) andimprove the present condition to satisfy thestudents’ needs.22.We hope the canteen can provide us withdishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23.The canteen should open more windows sothat we needn’t wait so long.24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen shouldattach importance to the quality. What’smore, different kinds of food should beprovided.25.Measures are supposed to be taken toimprove the conditions of the canteen.建议模板:Dear ….,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.建议句型积累:1.Many ways can contribute to solving theproblem, but I think the following may be the most effective ones.2.I’d like to make some suggestions on …….3.It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.It’s necessary for sb to do sth4.It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / Itwould be a better idea if…….5.It contributes /helps a lot if ………6.I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …It’s suggested / advised / recommended that……7.You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sthIt’s better to do sth8.Measures are supposed to be taken to do sthWe are supposed to take effective measures todo sth9.It’s high time that sb did sth. / It’s high time forsb to do sth建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。

在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。

请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old.Recently I have found that my daughter told lies tome. The other day she told me that she did well inthe final exam. However I found out she failed inmath and English. What should I do?写作要点:1.表明了解她的问题;2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因;3.提出至少两条建议要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。

3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。

4.书写需清晰、工整。

Hi,Sad Mother,I have learnedthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________作文范文: Hi,Sad Mother,I have learned that your daughter told lies to you. As a peer of your daughter, I think the reasons are as follows.To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie .Here are some suggestions for you. First of all , you ’d better have a heart-to –heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don ’t be too strict. It ’s suggested that you should allow her to make some minor(微小的) mistakes.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.daughter 女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的 idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事 1. It was because she didn ’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. She isn ’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And it ’s you who can do this.4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.7. The reason why she didn ’t tell you the truth may be that she didn ’t want to let you down. 8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.12. As far as I’m concerned, it ’s better to communicate with her in a friendly way to let her know it ’s wrong to tell lies.13. It ’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. 7. Please not to be so worried.8. One of the reason is that she isn ’t dare to tell you the truth.9. Because she afraid parents. 10. So she don ’t want to mention it. 11. You should apology to her.12. You ’d better to encourage her to be a honest people.13. You ’d better be care about her health and study.14. I’m very understand your condition. 15. She may doesn ’t want you to be angry.建议信(3)为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART ”专栏。

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