中考写作评分标准: 第四档: (15—13 分) 语言流畅,语句通顺,合乎逻辑。
适当使用连词成分。
完 全达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档: (12—10 分) 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确。
使用简单的连词成分。
达 到了预期的写作目的。
第二档: (9—6 分)漏掉一些信息点。
有些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响 理解。
使用简单的连接成分。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第一档: (5—1 分) 描述不清楚,内容不连贯。
语法结构或词汇错误影响了对写作 内容的理解。
较少使用连接成分。
不能清楚的表达写作目的。
必背范文选篇 感想 / 学习篇 ( 一 ) 为了交流学习经验, 提高学习效率, 《中学生英语辅导报》 举行了一次以 How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇 80 词左右的短文谈谈你的看 法。
【How to be a good learner?】 As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us. ( 二 ) 亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study” 为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求:1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟; 2.词数 80 左右。
【My English Study】 How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well. 情感 / 生活篇 ( 一 ) 父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。
请根据下 面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。
80 词左右,开头和结尾以给 出(不计入总词数)。
提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵 的东西,如领带等;2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
【Father’s Day】 Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts. If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it. No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so? ( 二 ) 今天是母亲节。
假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友 John 写一封电子邮件, 谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
要点如下:1. 表述你与母亲间的 情感;2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;3. 帮助母亲做点事;4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear John, It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua( 三 ) 某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为 How to keep a good relationship with parents 的征文活动。
请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此 次活动。
要点:1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;2.你对 这些问题的看法;3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【How to keep a good relationship with parents】 In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future. In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework. 写人 / 记事篇 ( 一 ) 假设 Linda 是你的好朋友, 你们两年没有见面了。
上个星期她从国外留学回 来,你们很高兴见到彼此。
请根据提示,简要介绍 Linda 的变化。
提示:1.外貌: 以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。
2.爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视 和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求:1. 不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;2.层次清晰,语言流畅;3.80 词左右。
【My best friend】 Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years. She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite. I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time. ( 二 ) 背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友 Michael 给他发来电子邮件,想了解康 明家乡的变化。