写作——描述性文章1. 描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言,形象地描绘出来。
2. 描述性文章的结构(1人物:开头应有简明的介绍文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述结尾进行评论或谈感受(2地点:要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语描述地点的位置通常由上至下,从里到外,从左至右,从远到近。
总之,无论是描述人物,还是地点、环境、都要详略得当,重点突出。
3. 学习并牢记下面的短语和句型表空间顺序in front of, in the front of, at the back of,on the right (left sideclose to, next to, opposite, across,inside, outsidein (to the south/east/west/northon one side..., on the other side (of常用短语和句型:方位1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on the right of, in the front of, near the window,2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. (On the right of the room,3. Next to it is a bed. (In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of4. They are opposite the door.(on the left/right of the room.5. The office building is in the east of the campus.(in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述国家,城市等7. China is located in Asia. (be situated… be s urrounded by , lie to the east of8. It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.9. The population of this city is 100,000 .路线10. When you come out of…(get to…reach…11. Cross the street (river (keep walking along… walk down…12. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. (the second traffic lights, the first crossing,13. Take the first turning on your left. (take the path which crosses the river.14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.15. Y ou’ll see(fin d it人物16. My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids.17. He is about 5feet and 7inches tall.18. She has a round face with two big eyes.描述物品19. This rope is 100meters long. =The length of this rope is 100 meters. = This rope is 100 meters in length. (in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape20.It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it. It’s made of straw.21. There are three books in the her drawer.1. 1999年NMET书面表达假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。
最近收到美国朋友Smith 先生的来信。
他三年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况.参照下图,给他写一封回信,介绍你校的变化。
注意:1回信须包括图画的主要内容,可适当增减细节,使内容连贯。
2词数100字左右。
图1 图2A. 审题:①一封信(体裁②谈学校的变化(三年前图1,三年后图2③重点在三年后的描述B. 题纲及常用结构①开头语:收到来信hear from sb. / get (receive your letter ….②学校的变化:新教学楼:a new school building图书馆:our new library新操场:the new playground树木环绕:lots of trees③表述方位的词:on one side (on the other sideon the right (leftThere be …. ,in front of , in and aroundC. 将以上要点扩展成句并连文,注意句与句之间的过渡。
Dear Mr. Smith ,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school . You are right , Quite a few changes have taken place . On one side of the road there is a new classroom building . On the other side , where the playground used to be now stands another new building our library . In it there are all kinds of books , newspapers and magazines . The playground is now in front of the school . We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school . I hope you come and see for yourself some day .Best wishes .Yours,Li Hua2. 假如你作为崔剑锋的同学接受美国一家报社记者的采访,请你介绍有关他的事迹。
根据所给提示,写一篇100词左右的短文。
Name : Cui JianfengBirthday : 8,15, 1971Birthplace : Heze , Shandong provinceEducation : 1989--- 1993, Biology Department , Peking University1996 Doctor’s degree, Princeton University , New Jersey Deeds : 1977 died for saving a boy on 16th Sept .范文分析:A. 审题:①文字和图画综合表达的一篇文章;②文章可分为两大部分B. 题纲及常用短语:①第一部分,谈他的经历:talk about his experience . Experience·name·Birthday·Birthplace·EducationWords and phrases could be used .graduate form / go abroad / receive the Doctor’s de gree②第二部分:谈他的救人及牺牲的故事His DeedsWords and expressions :·go outing / go for a picnic·hear the cry for help·see sb . doing sth .·jump into the river·lose one’s life③第三部分:结尾Conclusion·His story inspired lots of people .·We’ll remember him forever .·H e is always in our hearts . …C. 成文写作答案:Cui Jianfeng was born in August , 1971 , in Heze , Shandong province . After graduating from Biology Department , Peking University , he went abroad for further studies in Princeton University , New Jersey . There be studied very hard and it was in 1996 that he received the Doctor’s degree. On the 16th, September 1997, he went outingwith his classmates. Near the river, they were having a picnic when he heard the cry for help. He saw a boy sinking in the water. Without hesitation, he rushed towards the river and jumped into the water. With the help of the other American students, the boy was saved. Cui was about to get out of water when a rock hit him on the head. Cui lost his life. His heroic story spread all over t he city. We’ll remember him forever.练习1. 假如你叫Alice,你本应去机场接Danial,但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家,你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial,你给Danial写信说明上述情况,并描述Mary的外表。