I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful, but I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
２００５年湖南高考英语写作
题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办 的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去 北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你 的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式 给予答复。 注意： ７月１５日－２２日或８月 １选择适合你的时间 活动时间 １５日－２２日 并说明理由．
Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.
请用括号中所给的词把此组句子 连接为一个复合句。
I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp.
Thank you very much． Yours truly,
Li Ping
高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）：
并列句 (The compound sentence)
复合句 (The complex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列 句。 并列句
1. I turned on the TV.I watched it.
I turned on the TV and watched it.
１．完全完成了规定任务；
２．覆盖所有内容要点；
３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使 用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言 运用能力；
５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑；
６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．
Ⅰ英语句子的种类
简单句 (The simple sentence)
优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的
语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应 用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结 构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写 作目的。 句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。
缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
活动内容
参加英语角／学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座／表演英语短剧 看英语电影／教外教学中文
２选择两项你喜欢的活 动并说明理由． ３对活动的内容提出至 少一个建议或要求． ４词数１００左右． ５信的开头和结尾已经 给出．
对活动内容 的建议或要 求
考生作品
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English Corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will have a good time together. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Li Ping
2. I bought my sister a present.She
didn’t like it.
I bought my sister a present,but she didn’t like it.
3.He was tired. He went to bed. He was tired, so he went to bed.
I still remember the day when I first cld hid behind his mother's skirt. He was afraid of the dog.
The child hid behind his mother's skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.
3.He made a promise.He didn’t keep it. He made a promise, but he didn’t keep it. 4.Mary is opening the door. John is greeting her guests.