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注意写作时态
如果是遇到描述某个建筑,景点位置的变化, 那么时间节点意味着考生还需要注意时态问题。 如果是出现过去时间,那么就用过去时,描述 为了,那就是将来时,总之时态问题不能轻视。
从这个题目来看,右图是现在及将来的情况, 我们则需要用到一般现在时、现在完成时以及 一般将来时这几个时态。如:所有虚线标出的 地方是需要用到一般将来时态的。
1975年,在大学的每个角落都可以看到四个主 要区域,它们之间有几棵树。
In the north-western corner a sports center was situated, surrounded by a road which intersected another road leading to a lecture room in the south-eastern part. A library lay in the southwestern end and to its opposite side, there was a drama room and a music room boarding a big car park.
The graph shows the development of a particular college campus from 1975 to 2002 and the proposed development of 2020.
Summarize the details. Select and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
2002年,一个显著的变化是体育中心被拆除,一个室内中心计划在 2020年建成。此外,为了给中心的科学大楼让路,穿过校园的道路也 被拆除了。但是另一条新的道路将会被修建起来,将室内运动中心和 以前的图书馆连接起来,图书馆被分成了两部分,一半作为一个IT室。 虽然百家讲坛比1975年大了一倍,但原来的戏剧演播室被改成了地质 演播室,原来的地方被停车场占了,所以容量变大了。
总结
1. 开头段:改写题目,并总结两张图分别的主 要特点。
2. 主体段1: 句子间连接自然,步骤之间描述清 晰。
3. 主体段2: 按照比例从大到小介绍成分组成, 并介绍每一个细节。
4. 注意:连接;步骤;顺序;细节。
要点
开头段
主体段1
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4.注意文字信息
这个是地图题区别于图表题很重要的一点。地 图题的文字信息很重要,地图题的文字信息很 少但是很关键,考生们需要着重看标题,还有 一些标记
5.同义词转化
这个还是要强调一下,同义词转化在剑桥雅思 小作文的评分标准里依然是一个很重要的考点。 无论如何,考生们还是要注意词汇的丰富性和 多样性。
主体段2
Regarding the second diagram, concrete consists of mainly gravel, which is small stones, and this makes up 50% of the ingredients. The other materials used are sand (25%), cement (15%) and water (10%). These are all poured into a concrete mixer which continually rotates to combine the materials and ultimately produces concrete.
Байду номын сангаас 2.参照物
如果没有方向坐标,那么考生可以观察地图题 是否有参照物,这个参照物一般不会变动,那 么考生可以把这个参照物作为定位坐标,来进 行接下来的分段写作。当然,考生需要在写作 开头就强调这个参照物。
3.跟着路线走
如果是碰到一些地图题变动很大,比如某个公 园的变化散点很多,那么就观察有没有小道, 这些散点基本是按照小道进行的规划设计,考 生只需要强调这个公园的改造过程是沿着这个 小道或者主路进行规划即可。进而继续进行
图表题中也会出现变化和趋势,考生需要将数 据加以分析和归纳。但是地图题和图表题不一 样的是,我们只有文字信息,没有数据,我们 只能对一些关键文字信息进行处理,比如关键 的时间信息,过去,现在和将来等。
注意文章结构
依然是总分总的结构,具体的分段描述上,考 生们需要将对应的变化罗列描述。根据这篇文 章,具体的逻辑可以是按照时间节点来分段是 最简单的。
The diagrams illustrate the way in which cement is made and how it is then used in the process of making concrete. Overall, limestone and clay pass through four stages before being bagged ready for use as cement which then accounts for 15% of the four materials used to produce concrete. While the process of making cement uses a number of tools, the production of concrete requires only a concrete
主体段1
In the first stage of making cement, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powder. This powder is then combined in a mixer before passing into a rotating heater which has constant heat applied at one end of the tube. The resulting mixture is ground in order to produce cement. The final product is afterwards put into bags ready to be used.
注意写作顺序
当然,我们还要遵循地图题的一个顺序原则, 不要眉毛胡子一把抓,不然很容易使得文章读 上去乱七八糟的。考生可以按照顺时针,逆时 针的方向来进行文章内容的描述,或者根据地 图题从整体进行描述,最后去细扣一些细节。
具体方法如下:
1.定坐标
一般地图题上是有坐标的,那么建议大家在动 笔前就迅速定位,根据方向来描述对象。
雅思小作文范文解析
本次雅思写作出乎意料地又考了地图题,是本 年度第6次出现地图题目(1月1次、4月1次、6月 2次、8月1次)。
所以建议考生谨慎对待地图,不要抱有侥幸心 理。此题是关于一间大学校园的变化。年份为 1975, 2002, 2020,使用过去时态和将来预测。 写作主线可以按照时间分别描述,也可以以变 化为主线来分段。
雅思小作文范文
The two maps compare changes in the layout of a specific university campus in 1975, 2002 and 2020.
In 1975, four main areas could be noticed in each corner of the university with several trees between them.
在西北角,一个体育中心坐落在一条路的周围, 这条路与另一条路交叉,通向东南方的一个演 讲室。在西南端有一个图书馆,在它的对面, 有一个戏剧室和一个音乐室,在一个大停车场
In 2002, one striking change was that the sports center had been removed and an indoor one is planned for 2020. Also the road running across the campus was demolished in order to make way for a science building in the center. But another new road will be build to connect the indoor sports center with the former library which had been divided into two so that half part served as an IT room. While the lecture room had become twice as large as it was in 1975, the original drama room was turned into a geology room, the place before which was gained by the car park, so its capacity was enlarged.
In summary, great changes had occurred as this university had more constructions over these years.
综上所述,随着这所大学近年来建筑的增多, 发生了巨大的变化。
The chart shows the average time 16-22-year olds spent on playing video games in four different countries between 1992 and 2002.Summarize the details. Select and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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