托福写作技巧及模板
托福考试的最后一部分是“写作” 要求考生写2 托福考试的最后一部分是“写作”，要求考生写2篇文 章: 第一篇叫做综合写作（ writing）， ），让考生用 第一篇叫做综合写作（Integrated writing），让考生用 3分钟时间先读一篇约250字的文章，然后听一段2分钟 分钟时间先读一篇约250字的文章 然后听一段2 字的文章， 关于对所读内容的评论。再让考生写一篇150到225个字 关于对所读内容的评论。再让考生写一篇150到225个字 的文章 第二篇作文叫“独立写作” 和笔考、机考均无两样， 第二篇作文叫“独立写作”，和笔考、机考均无两样， 给定考生一熟悉的话题，让考生在30分钟内写一篇 分钟内写一篇300 给定考生一熟悉的话题，让考生在30分钟内写一篇300 字的文章。典型的问法是： 字的文章。典型的问法是：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearance. Use specific reasons and details to support you answer.
评分标准2 评分标准2：well organized and well developed 逻辑条理清楚，发展充分。 逻辑条理清楚，发展充分。各位考生 要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解“ 要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解“八 股文”的结构，千万不要写中国式的“ 股文”的结构，千万不要写中国式的“八 股文” 而应写出“美式八股文” 股文”，而应写出“美式八股文”。
不少同学在独立写作部分可以拿到满分。 不少同学在独立写作部分可以拿到满分。 考前的准备和模板的恰当应用是必不可少 的。
1. 熟悉和理解4大评分标准是高分关键 熟悉和理解4
评分标准1 评分标准1：effectively addresses the writing topic and task. 要求考生有效地阐明主题， 要求考生有效地阐明主题，考生千万 不要跑题。考生全部跑题现象较少， 不要跑题。考生全部跑题现象较少，但是 局部跑题现象十分严重， 局部跑题现象十分严重，这也是考生不能 轻取高分的缘故。 轻取高分的缘故。
petitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics) 12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable) 13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way) 14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid) plain=grumble (complain something in a badbadtempered way) 18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe) 20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel
31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something’s large), tremendous(INFORMAL) something’ 32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.) 33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.) 34.attack=assault (physically attack someone), assail (attack violently) 35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)! 36.ruin=devastate (it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.) 39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always) 40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed)
评分标准3 评分标准3：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的论据一定要具体、明确， 考生的论据一定要具体、明确，且对 论点有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。 论点有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。
评分标准4 评分标准4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.（通过谴词造 idiom.（ 句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度） 句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度） 这一点是各位考生经常忽视,迷惘和不清楚的一点。 这一点是各位考生经常忽视,迷惘和不清楚的一点。托 福作文占总分120分的 分 分的30 福作文占总分120分的30分。 大家争取在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分，至少28 大家争取在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分，至少28 分。 凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项 凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评 分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评 分标准。不要用外国人都不用的词组， 分标准。不要用外国人都不用的词组，且能用常用的词 千万不要用偏词。 千万不要用偏词。
托福作文必备:50组精选替换词汇总 托福作文必备:50组精选替换词汇总 结
1. important =crucial (extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important) mon=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere) 3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants) 4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly) 5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something; ignore means no attention.) 6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent) 7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), oldseek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it. FORMAL) 8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail) 9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people) 10.top=peak, summit /取决于 个评分标准哪条更重要？ 考生对作文考分的期望值。若要考满分， 考生对作文考分的期望值。若要考满分， 点均重要。千万不能跑题， 此4点均重要。千万不能跑题，一跑题可就 分了。考试费也就白交了。 是0分了。考试费也就白交了。
二、新托福独立写作模板
注意：模板是死的，人是活的。文章的开 注意：模板是死的，人是活的。 头最好自己写。按照课上所讲的句式， 头最好自己写。按照课上所讲的句式，怎 么写都可以，只要保证正确， 么写都可以，只要保证正确，有一定的语 法结构（ 从句，同位语，插入语等） 法结构（如：从句，同位语，插入语等）
21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is) plex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details) 23. Lonely=solitary (if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her) 24.small=minuscule(very small), minute, 25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political) 26.hard26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly) 27.difficult=arduous (if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts) 28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it) 29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically) 30.show=demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.)