中文:你不要学我样,你身体没有我好。
(指:情况不一样。
)错译:Never learn from me,since you are not so strong as I am.正译:Don't follow my example,since you are not so strong as I am.说明:“Learn from sb.”指“向某人学习”,并不是“照我一样做”的意思。
中文:由于时间关系,我就到此为止。
错译:Due to the time,I should stop here.正译:As time is up (or:limited),I am afraid I have to stop here.说明:“due to…”是“由于……之故”而导致某种结果的意思,本句用due to 不合逻辑。
“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。
)”1.seeing strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西)2.meeting people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)3.keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康)4.enjoying beautiful scenery (欣赏各地美景)5.understanding how people live (了解人们怎样生活)6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜)7.tasting different foods and local flavours (品尝各地风味)8.getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (了解各地风土人情)9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱)10.gaining knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识)11.making one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔)12.gaining other knowledge (获得其他方面知识)13.seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)I. enjoy places of interesta. enjoy beautiful scenery in different places (4)b. see places read of in books (13)c. visit famous cities and scenic spots (6)II. know people and their customsa. meet people with different interest (2)b. see strange and different things (1)c. get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (8)d. taste different foods and local flavours (7)e. understand how people live in different ways (5)III. benefit us both mentally and physicallya. gain knowledge of geography and history (10)b. gain other knowledge (12)c. arouse the fervent love for our motherland (9)d. keep us healthy (3)e. make one less narrow minded (11)The Advantages of TravelTravel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.First,by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books,and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.Second,we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people,taste different foods and local flavours if we like. In this way,we can understand how differently other people live.Third,travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge,which arouses the love for our motherland,but will also help us keep healthy and make us less narrow-minded. Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically.With all these advantages of travel,it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.一、主题句原则To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句)。
Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.二、一二三原则1)first,second,third,last2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3)the first,the second,the third,the last4)in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly5)to begin with,then,furthermore,finally6)to start with,next,in addition,finally7)first and foremost,besides,last but not least8)most important of all,moreover,finally9)on the one hand,on the other hand10)for one thing,for another thing三、短语优先原则I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.四、多实少虚原则再比如:走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!五、多变句式原则1)加法(串联)I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的:Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover2)转折(拐弯抹角)The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin,but it was warm.更多的短语:despite that,still,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,notwithstanding3)因果(so,so,so)讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。
其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall,so we went home.更多短语:then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this,reason,so that4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:When to go,Why he goes away…5)附加(多此一举)The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don…t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.6)排比(排山倒海句)Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.。