2007年广东高考英语作文及答案Ⅳ写作(共两节 满分40分) 第一节基础写作(共1小题 满分15分) 上周 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。

以下是调查数据 偶像(idol) 女生男生伟人18% 18% 父母25% 11% 影视明星50% 14% 体育明星6% 48% 没有偶像1% 9% [写作内容] 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由。

[写作要求] 1 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯。

参考答案 Version1: Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on "Who Is Your Idol ". The survey shows that half of the girls choose/take/regard film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor/are in favor of/have a preference for/are fond of sports stars. As date shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures”is the same as that of the girls. (Of which the percentage is 18%) //As for “Great figures”, the percentage of boys and girls are equal. As for(可多个替换) myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.Version2: Last week we did a survey among 2600 students on“ who is your idol”. Among the students interviewed, 50% of the girls take film stars as their idols while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars. Parents ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the same percentage of boys and girls(18%) think their parents are their choice. As for me, Bill Gates is my idol because I want to earn a lot of money to make our country more powerful. 注意事项 1.注意信息处理 不可把所有的数据都盲目地写出。

2.一般从最多 最少 或排名角度出发来写。

信息处理的结果 上周 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey) 词汇积累 进行调查Make/have/do a survey/investigation about/on sth among +对象成句Last week,we did a survey on “Who Is Your Idol” among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 影视明星50% 14% 体育明星6% 48% 信息处理 50%女同学喜欢影视明星 48%男同学喜欢体育明星词汇积累 喜欢like/be fond of/prefer/have preference for/favour/be in favour of 、sb’s favorite is.. of which the percentage is …% 。

what sb like/love most is… of which the percentage is …% 。

选择…最为偶像take、choose …as their idol Regard …as their idol 然而 while 成句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. 句子衔接 The survey shows us…According to the survey/data/result What the survey shows us is that…3 “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异偶像(idol) 女生排名男生排名伟人18% 18% 2 父母25% 2 11% 4 影视明星50% 14% 3 体育明星6% 48% 1 没有偶像1% 9% 词汇积累 排名 rank 成句 As date shows,“parents”ranks the second for the girls,but (ranks )the fourth for the boys. 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 伟人18% 18% 信息处理 男女同学以伟人为偶像的数值是一致的。

词汇积累 数据一致、百分比一致 As for。

, the number/percentage of boys and girls are equal/the same. The percentage of A choosing …is the same as that of B 成句 .However,the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures”is the same as that of the girls. 5. 你的偶像及理由在我看来、我认为 In my opinion/view/point of view As for me/myself As far as I am concerned 第二节读写任务(共l小题 满分25分) 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Dear Ari, As yousleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tinybody, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari. Love, Daddy [写作内容] 假设你就是信中的Ari 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。

今天是父亲50岁生日 你准备以写信的方式 祝贺他的生日。

以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好) 1 以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望 2 以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩 并包括如下要点 (1)读信后的感受 (2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受 (3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。

[写作要求] 1 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯。