• He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. 一般过去时；宾语从句
Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.
An Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work.
Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that with his help, I caught up with my classmates at last.
4. 亲身经历或参加的活动
• 5. 以亲身经历中得到的知识(或技能、经验)
中考作文评分标准
第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的
语言结构单一；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语 言错误较多；书写不够工整，字数较少。整体而言， 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（0-6分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关 内容；应用的语言结构单一且不规范；句子不通顺， 行文不连贯；语言错误多；书写潦草，字数不足50。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
First, we gave away some books and stationery to them.
Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly.
An Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.___________________________
An Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.
• An unforgettable present
• An unforgettable trip
• … watching movies is my best hobby … I like watching movies.
• n.
• 1. 经验, 体验 2. 经历; 阅历; 感受, 体会
• 3. 传统
• By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.
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Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. 总起
• Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. 一般过去时；被动；
副词；情态动词
• While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. 过去进行时；一般过去时态； 非谓语动词
• Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和 词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚， 没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（10-12分） 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应 用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务的要 求；句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书 写工整；字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。
• 五、书面表达(共15分) • 还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某
英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience”为题进行征文活动。 • 请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈 你的感想。 • 参考词语：
remember, help, wonderful, feel, think
• By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.
跑题篇
• An unforgettable person