专题检测卷(三十二)短文改错(建议用时: 40分钟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1(2013·哈尔滨模拟)Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight A’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other.2The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.3(2013·绵阳模拟)Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to children. They were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and give performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their care and help; for return, they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us.4(2013·辽宁模拟)Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secon dly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally, for example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as, your classmates, your teachers, your parents.They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”.答案解析1.答案：Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in myhavewhole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well inifhis exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straigh t A’s, Dadtakesaid, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ” Victor’s dreamwordwas to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then tookreal fora bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on theclimbedtrees. We began to play ∧snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before.withWe were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it atthemeach other.1. 【解析】第一句had→have。
主句谓语动词是一般现在时态, 所以, 状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态, 不可能是过去完成时态。
2. 【解析】第二句because→if。
在that引导的宾语从句中, 又包含一个条件状语从句。
在爸爸许诺时, 考试还没进行, 所以, 应该用if引导条件状语从句。
3. 【解析】第二句bring→take。
此处的take表示“带我们去”, 不能用bring。
4. 【解析】第四句words→word。
keep one’s word是固定词组, 意为“遵守诺言”。
5. 【解析】第五句really→real。
用形容词修饰名词。
6. 【解析】第六句at→for。
for Christmas vacation意为“去度圣诞假期”。
7. 【解析】第七句climb→climbed。
文章叙述的是过去的事情, 故应用一般过去时态。
8. 【解析】第八句play后面加with。
play with snow意为“玩雪”。
9. 【解析】第十句去掉the。
little children表示泛指, 其前面不用定冠词。
10. 【解析】第十一句第二个it→them。
此处的them指的是snowballs, 而不是snow。
2. 答案：The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in highdecidedschool. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar ingetting dollarsmy pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks awayfrom home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total differentwhen totallyexperience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and morecreative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties w ithout being told ∧. I have to be morecareful because my parents are not here to give me theirtoadvices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules foradvice Onme to follow.myself1. 【解析】将第一句中的decide改为decided。