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My favorite season is winter. Why? Because ﹙可删除﹚ in the winter we can use the snow makes ﹙to make﹚ snowmen and can with my friends to throw snowball each other ﹙ throw snowball to each other with my friends ﹚. What’s more, we can also lisit is covered world by snowy ﹙The whole world is covered by snow﹚. The write is everywhere ﹙Everywhere is white.﹚ . Many children step on the snow make ﹙and play﹚ different kinds of games . These make me feel very well. So I ﹙my﹚ favorite season is winter. And you? 陈妮娜
My favorite season is spring. In spring, the sky is blue , the air is fresh and the river is clean. We can plant more trees in spring we can go hiking in spring and we can go fishing in spring . Spring is the best season of the year. And morning is the best time of the day. So I Always read new words in the morning . Then I can remember them. What a beautiful season! Ij like spring very much , what about you? Would you like to share with me? ﹙孙悦﹚ Let’s be friends!
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-----中考作文能得满分吗？ -----别吹牛了，中考作文能得满分，鼻子想青！ 中考作文要求我们什么？高吗？ 答： 不高，总结起来两条，6个字
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My favorite season
My favorite season is summer, summer is very hot. But it’s good for sports. I like swimming best. I often go swimming with my friends in summer. In summer we can eat ice cream and some fruit. In summer we have the longest holiday. It’ summer holiday. In summer holiday we can do some thing interesting, such as swimming, playing basketball, go to the park and so on. I think summer is the best season of a year.
• My favorite season is autumn. In China , autumn is always from September. When autumn comes ,the leaves turn yellow slowly. People often go hiking and fishing on weekends. At his time, the farmers are busy doing their farm work. It’s a harvest time for everyone to gain what they want to get. Although the weather is a litle cold , I like autumn best . What a golden season!
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My favorite season
My favorite season is spring. Because in spring, the weather turns warm, the trees turn green, the flowers start to come out. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. In spring, it often rains. I like the rain. And in spring, I can plant trees on the hill. Spring is the first season in a year. People often feel very happy. It makes me happy, too. So I like spring best.
• My favorite season is winter. It is the coldest season in a year. People don’t like winter. Because it is so cold . But I like it. When it snows, the world is all white . How beautiful! We often make a snowman in the open air. I like walking in the snow , it’s very interesting. I love winter!