• 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的
情况下展示自己的语言功底。
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审 列加连美
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一 12-15分 要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语
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篇结构完整；语言结构丰富；句子通顺，行文连贯，
表达清楚；语言基本无误（不超过3处）；书写工整；
词数符合要求。
二 9-11分 要点基本齐全，能写出要求中的大部分要点；语篇
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say,
in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), second(ly), next,
_w_a_t_c_h_s_thp_eotretlesphpornoegbryatrmyinsg in Englishm. any times . …
developing
it is not enough You can take notes by
your study skills .
to study hard .
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
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knowledge comes You can ask teachers
asking questions from ques. tioning or ask each other
写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
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加首尾段 首 There are three good ways to …. 尾 Learning is a lifelong journey. So
your English will be better.
Your friend
…
later, since then, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, in a wo.rd, generally speaking,
写作第五步：
Alexander Graham Bell succeeded in inventing the telephone by trying many times . …
developing your study skills .
it is not enough to study hard .
You can take notes by writing down key words.
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practiciteisanedasleiearrnfor
y“oUusetoitpoarylose
itIf.”you
Alexander Graham Bell
liskueccseepdoedrtisn,inyvoenutincgan
fromatmteinsttiaoknetso. it for a long time
/I think you should…
read English newspapers
look up new words in a dictionary
If you do this, you can learn more words.
Read 2b again 文an章d 内fill in the chart. 容
Unit 1 How can we become good learners?
Period 6 Section B 3a-3b
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A: How can I improve my English? B: You can improve your English by…
/One way is by…
listening to English songs
perfect.” Alexander succeeded by trying many times. You
could also learn English well by asking questions because
knowledge comes from questioning.
Learning is a lifelong journey. So be patient. I believe
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Write a letter to your friend. Give him/her some advice about the best ways to learn English.
I think you should….
It is also a good idea to ….
You could try to improve your English by…. .
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20；注意：凡未答题或抄写试卷其他文字内容的，
一律判为零分。 .
Dear Mary,
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There are three good ways to help you learn English.
I think one way is by creating an interest in what you
listening to the conversations in English movies If you do this, your pronunciation will be improved .
A: How can I improve my English? B: It’s a good idea to…
learn. If you do this, you brain will be more active. If you
like music ,you can listen to English songs. It is also a good
idea to practice and learn from mistakes. “Practice makes
be patient. I believe your English will be better.
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写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次 清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
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关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
writing down key words.
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knowledge comes You can ask teachers
asking questions from ques. tioning or ask each other
__总___
文章结 构
__分___ __总___
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
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结构较完整；应用的语言结构虽不太丰富，但基本
能满足任务要求；虽有一些语言错误，但基本不影
响意义表达；书写较工整；词数基本符合要求。
三 5--8分 要点不齐全，只能写出要求中的部分要点；语篇结
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构不完整；语言结构单一；语言错误较多，影响意
思表达；书写不够工整；词数不足50.
四 0—4分 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇；词数不足
写作第二步 列
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
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I think you should…. It is also a good idea to …. You could try to improve your English by….
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practice and learn “Use it or lose it .” from mistakes.