优秀句：
At noon we had a picnic in the sunshine. After a short rest，we had great fun singing and dancing，telling stories and playing chess.
2．避免同一词语的重复使用
为了使文章更生动、更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中类似意思的词和短语很多，如love，enjoy，prefer，appreciate，be fond of，care for等。
【典例】他已决定长大了当老师。
一般句：
He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
优秀句：
He has made up his mind to be a teacherwhen he grows up.
4．恰当套用某些固定表达方式
【典例1】他太累了，不能再往前走了。
【示例】
假设你是学生李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：
1．求助事由；
2．求助内容；
3．表达感激。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob，
I'm writing in the hope that youwill be kind enough to do me a favor.
优秀句：
Not until then did I realize words could be so powerful in both positive and negative ways.
6．适当运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结
构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。
【典例】听到这个消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
【典例】我喜欢读书，而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。
一般句：
I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
优秀句：
I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
3．适当使用短语代替单词
一般句：
When they heard the news，they all jumped with joy.
优秀句：
Hearing the news，they all jumped with joy.
5．灵活改变句子开头
在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语＋谓语＋宾
语”，即主语位于句子开头。若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如使用倒装语序或以状语开头等，就会增强文章的表现力。
【典例】直到那时，我才意识到言语在积极方面和消极方面
都那么有影响力。
一般句：
I didn't realize words could beso powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.
一般句：
He was vBiblioteka ry tired. He couldn't walk any further.
优秀句：
He was too tired to walk any further.
【典例2】生活中总有一些充满挑战性的事情。除了面对我
们别无选择。
There is always something challenging in our life. We have no choice but to face it.
I would appreciateit if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【如何充实核心】
1．交叉使用长句与短句
在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Bob，
I'm writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.When it comes to papercutting，there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown.For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known.However，only when I put the idea into practice did I find that myEnglish is far from satisfaction.
As far as I'm concerned，you have a good command of written English，which impresses me a lot.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished？I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
【典例】中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱
歌的唱歌，跳舞的跳舞，还有的讲故事、下棋，大家玩得很开心。
一般句：
At noon we had a picnic in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.