(一)再说说下面19句万能句的重要性吧:熟练(背N遍,写N遍,熟练到……反正就是超级熟练,想到第一个词可以不加思索的背出整个一句话)这19句,你大概可以写出任何一篇你想写的作文。
(二)用法:作文的第一段套用下面的某一句,本人习惯as we can see form the picture ……第一段不宜过长20-30个单词吧。
第二段的第一句话套用,第一句话尽可能得要长,之后的能套用则套用,不能的自己写,第三段的套用!不商量。
(下文中小括号里德数字表示一般在第几段套用)(三)再说说套用的作用,1、首先大家不要担心这样写阅卷老师会怎么想,只要你对这20句特别熟悉,你就会用的很灵活,写出来会没有棱角,就是你的。
2、每句套用的一定要珍惜,字数一定不要少!20个以上吧!一般可以套用4到5句,至少套用的就100个词了,这篇作文的大框架也就起来了。
3、套用的一般换原句中的名词,千万防止语法错误,套用的地方都是作为最关键的地方,也是阅卷老师看的地方,所以一定要防止低级错误(尤其是语法不是很好的人)。
4、书写用可擦中性笔,一定要工整,只要书写足够好,可以覆盖个别错误。
让阅卷老师看着舒服点吧!(四)这些来自黄皮书和新东方100篇模板,已经是本人删减到最少了,本人认为每句都很重要,希望对大家能够有所帮助!1、it is apparent that the author of the drawing tries to reveal to us: a finishing line always leads to another starting point.显而易见的是,作者的绘画试图向我们揭示:终点线总是导致另一个起点。
2、Such stimulating stories are not rare in our daily life . the most persuasive example is Madam Curies ,a world well-knowned female scientist. She was awarded twice the nobel prize for physics and for chemistry, within less than 10years. It is rather a unique thing in history of science in the whole world这种刺激的故事并不罕见,在我们的日常生活。
最有说服力的例子是居里夫人,一个世界著名的女科学家。
她获得了两次诺贝尔奖的物理学和化学,在不到10年。
在整个世界的科学历史上这是一个相当独一无二的事情3、The harm caused by tobacco consumption is experiencing a similar upwardtrend-statistics indicates that 30000 people die of smoking and related diseases every year.烟草消费所造成的危害也日益增长——统计数据表明,每年有30000人死于和吸烟有关的疾病。
4、what the drawing is trying to express is very conspicuous ,it shows people who are ……,moreover ,at the bottom of the picture are four huge characters, meaning “sports” and “health” ,which targets rem inding us that sports and health are intrinsically connected.这幅图试图表达的信息是非常明显的,这表明人们......,此外,在图的底部四个巨大的字,意思是“运动”和“健康”的目标,这提醒我们,运动和健康是有着内在的联系。
5、the picture describes the scene of a very typical family workshop which we might find in every neighborhood in china .图片描述的情景,一个非常典型的家庭作坊,我们可能会在中国的每一个家庭社区中发现它们。
第二段1、this picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon这幅画反映了一个发人深省的社会现象2、the message conveyed in the picture seems to be that people tend to underestimate their abilities and magnify difficulties when confronted with challenges. But in fact , it is not the case.信息传递的画面似乎是因为人们往往低估自己的能力和放大困难时,面临的挑战。
但事实上,它不是这样的。
3、nevertheless, given the pessimistic statistics at the present, we can still predict optimistically that tobacco consumption will decline based on several emerging tendencies . in the first place , there is an extensive public awareness of the negative impact of smoking, and as a result ,more people resist the temptation of cigarettes. In the second place, governments are setting more regulations to limit tobacco production . the effectiveness of such policy was testified by the prompt drop of the tobacco production from A to B ,as see in the picture.然而,目前的数据非常悲观,我们可以乐观地预测烟草消费将下降的基础上出现的几种倾向。
在第一个地方,有一个广泛的公众意识的负面影响吸烟,因此,越来越多的人拒绝香烟的诱惑。
此外,各国ZF正在制定各项措施限制烟草的生产。
可以从画面中看到,从甲地到乙地对这种政策进行了迅速下降的烟草生产。
(这个翻译的不是很好)4、as a result , the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span ,just as the picture shows us. 因此,恶劣的生活条件和巨大的工作压力自然导致他们较差的健康和较短的寿命,正如图中告诉我们的。
5、the picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that we can actually exercise anywhere , as long as wu have the awareness of preserving heath by exercise.这幅画是发人深省的,它竭力说服听众,我们其实可以在任何地方运动,只要我们有意识的锻炼保持健康。
6、the artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the concept that to habitually exercise is like to deposit money bit by bit in the bank.艺术家用这种独特的隐喻,赋予我们的观念,锻炼身体的习惯就像是把钱存点滴在银行。
7、the sanitation problem of family workshops in the food industry has existed for a long time . it can be mainly attributed to two factors . the first and perhaps key factor is ignorance toward sanitation . the other reason lies on some businessmen’s short of oc cupational disciplines .家庭作坊的卫生问题在食品工业中存在已久。
这可以归因于主要因素。
第一个也是最重要的因素是无知的卫生。
另一个原因在于一些商家缺乏职业纪律。
8、the tremendous contrast presented by the drawing alarmingly reminds us of the detrimental deterioration of oceanic ecosystem by the greediness of mankind.该图所显示出来的巨大反差使我们警醒地意识到海洋生态系统造成了人类的贪婪第三段1、I maintain that effective measures must be taken to put an end to this phenomenon . firstly, we need to advocate social responsibility and professional ethics in each field . secondly, strict regulations should be enacted and enforced to create a harmonious and orderly society .only through the combined efforts of government and society can we forcefully and completely climinate this “tumor”.我认为必须采取有效的措施来结束这种现象。