英语写作常见错误总结分析一书面表达常见错误㈠文章的格式混乱:主要表现为段落不清,层次不明。
(1)四边留空:卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。
这样的文章才能整齐、美观,给人以清晰、明快的感觉。
(2)空格:文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格。
㈡大小写方面的错误在评改过程中,有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷,这是考生的一个弱点。
一般来说,大写规则有以下几条:(1)大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母,如:He said ,“He is going to Shanghai next week”.(2) 大写专有名词,或用作专有名词的部分普通名词,通常是缩略形式。
如:Dr G . G . East(3) 大写缩写字母。
如:MPA ,MBA ,BBC(4) 文章标题要大写。
(5) 头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后就小写。
例如:Captain Smith --------Smith,the captain Uncle George-------- George ,my uncle四、标点符号错误及分析(6)一定要注意正确使用标点符号,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。
一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法,尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。
㈢理解错误。
有些考生错误的把题目中所给的汉语提纲直接译成了英语。
也有的考生在看图作文时没能正确理解题意。
㈣文不对题。
有些考生一味将自己会写的东西堆砌在一起,而没有紧扣主题,以致于下笔千言,离题万里。
且言多必失,错误百出。
㈤语法错误主要表现在单复数,人称,时态,语态,结构,搭配和拼写等等。
【错例1】It was my turn,I was very nervous .【分析】这是一种“句子﹢逗号﹢句子”的错误。
按照英文语法,句子与句子之间应有连接词连接。
此句的正确表达应为:When it was my turn,I was very nervous。
/It was my turn and I was very nervous 。
【错例2】Every time when I went to her house ,she was out【分析】every time是从属连词,引导时间状语从句,。
故应去掉when。
类似的还有:each time,the moment,the minute,the instant,directly ,immediately 等等。
此外,词组the first time,the last time,the next time,by the time ,all the time 也可直接引导时间状语从句。
【错例3】I and Li Ming went up to her【分析】英语人称代词排列顺序可按下面的顺口溜记忆:单数2,3,1(you ,he and I),复数1,2,3;(we ,you and they)都是三人称,女后男在先(he and she );若是有过失,主动要承担;单数1,3,2(I,he and you ),复数3 ,2 ,1(they ,you and we);晚辈与动物,我须放在前(I and my son;I and the dog);人称排列好,你会用语言。
所以上句错例应改为:Li Ming and I went up to her(六)汉语式英语㈥汉语式英语学生在写书面表达时,易受汉语习惯的影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,但不符合英语表达习惯。
A 谓语型:近来,我们村发生了很大的变化。
【误】Recently our village has taken place great changes .【正】Recently great changes have taken place in our villageB主语型: 她花五元钱买了一本词典.【误】she cost five yuan to buy a dictionary.【正】It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary / The dictionary cost him five yuan .动词使用场合主语Cost 花金钱物/ itSpend 花金钱/ 时间人Take 花时间itpay 花金钱人C 表语型:1 将定语误用作表语.【误】His friends are few他的朋友少【正】He has few friends .2误用表语【误】The population of China is many .中国人口多.【正】the population of China is large解析: 在用number ,population ,amount ,salary ,audience等用large,small作表语㈦时间不够有的学生作文水平很高,可惜没有把全文写完整,有的甚至一半还没有写完,也许时间分配不合理,致使前松后紧, 给作文留的时间太少。
二高分技巧指导㈠句式多变,语法活用句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位,所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。
好的英语句子能够生动,形象,准确的表达内容。
所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达,必须从写好句子开始。
英语基本句型及造句:①主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句)The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.②主语+不及物动词+副词This kind of wine drinks well and sells well.③主语+谓语+介词+宾语He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters④主语+系动词+形容词Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.⑤主语+谓语+直接宾语This factory produces 1000 cars a week.⑥主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语He wrote his family a letter yesterday.⑦主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(to do)I will get someone to repair the recorder for you.He invited me to teach at a well-known university.⑧主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(do)I often hear her sing the song.The boss made workers work 15 hours a day.. ⑨主语+谓语+现在分词Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?⑩主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语Nothing can prevent us from going forward.㈡巧用过渡词,连接词,增强文章的逻辑性,紧凑感。
有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的,句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合,是无法达到有效表达的目的。
常见的句子之间的连接手段有:1 使用代词指代上一句中的名词2重复使用上一句中的词3使用连接词4使用平行结构高考大纲中常用的连接词:表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well as,moreover,furthermore, in addition, 转折对比关系的: but,however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although,in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless,not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today,this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others,表因果关系的since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that,表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else,表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly,at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century,after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last,all of a sudden表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last,表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way,表进行举例说明: for instance, for example, like, such as,表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a wordin conclusion, in closing, in summary.㈢巧用高级结构,提高文章的档次“见微知著,一叶知秋”。
词汇的选择处处体现作者的词汇和整体英语水平。
同学们应掌握一些表达效果好,使用场合广的高级语法,提高文章的档次,提升文章的品位。
但是不要挖空心思,追求新,奇,难的结构。
下面介绍一些常用高级语法的使用:1 强调句:It is English and computer classes that I like best (NMET1996书面表达)2分词结构:Hearing this ,a few people began to run after him.(2004高考辽宁卷)3倒装句: Such is our present life , a happy and colorful one (NMET2001)4 独立主格结构:My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind(NMET1997)5 About 9‟clock yesterday evening, I was busy preparing for tomorrow‟s test when suddenly loud noises came into my room (2004高考广东卷)6 Of the two , ECCED is the more expensive,costing52 yuan, and XD costs11 yuan㈣长短句搭配,锦上添花。