读后续写(2017.6浙江卷)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He was a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1The car abruptly stopped in front of him._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________Paragraph 2A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
一、阅读理解能力(一).浅层的信息定位能力:who, when, where, what, why, how等审前文大意以及要点:①核心内容解读:Mac 与朋友一起去游玩。
一个朋友的自行车坏了,就让他先走,说之后他们会赶上他的。
他在前行的时候,却意外被狼追赶了。
于是他拼命逃,却得不到援助。
这时,一辆车停在了他前面......②要点:Who: Mac, his friends, Paul and BeekyWhen: on a bright, warm July afternoonWhere: from his home to AlaskaWhat: took a trip and made an adventureWhy: enjoyed the life(二).深层的文本分析能力:①理清故事的发展线索②关注故事的语言风格【情节分析】Mac与朋友骑行——朋友车坏,让Mac先行——Mac独行,欣赏风景——被狼追赶,最初误以为是狗——心跳加速,朝狼喷洒喷雾——狼后退,一分钟后又赶上,咬破帐篷包——再次喷洒喷雾,狼更快地追赶——Mac向经过的汽车求助,同时不敢减速——Paul和Becky开车路过,发现险情——Mac听到汽车声,拦下汽车,而狼就离他十几码远。
二、由读到写的思维能力细读两段续写的开头语,理顺续写段落的逻辑关系;围绕划定的10个关键词,合理创新故事情节。
1.抓住首句设问。
Para. 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Question 1: Whose car was it?Question 2: Why did it stop?Question 3: How did Mac feel?Question 4: What would Mac do?Question 5: Did Paul and Becky offered help?Para. 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.Question 1: After they arrived, what would they do?Question 2: How did they express gratitude?Question 3: Were they to continue the bike trip to Alaska?【词汇精炼】①赤手空拳bare hands ②与……斗争fight with/against③靠近approach ④危险状况dangerous situation⑤僵持状态deadlock ⑥撤退,逃跑withdraw/run away⑦威胁threat ⑧在远处in the distance【佳句锤炼】①他们两手空空,不敢与狼搏斗。
With nothing on the hand, they dared not to fight against the wolf.②与此同时,狼可能会感觉到周围人的威胁,所以它开始慢慢后退。
In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people’s threats around, so it began to step back slowly.【句式升级】He saw the wolf’s face near him. He used his fist to hit the face of the wolf strongly.Seeing the wolf’s face so close to him, he hit it with all his strength/ heavily using his fist.2. 情感表达的多样性Mac’s feeling:Surroundings: Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal.Thoughts: He thought fondly of his wife“Man, that’s a big dog!”Actions: Mac’s heart jumped.He fired at the wolf a second time, and againMac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,微技能之细节描写(表示感到害怕)【中译英】1、当看到那只凶恶的狼时,Mac感到很害怕。