How to add reasonable details to your article
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广东一模书面表达
假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英 国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英 文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：
1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3. 委托报社刊登招领启事.
注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would appreciate it if you could do md to your reply.
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交际语
结
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如何适当增加细节
(2)In order to get some practical experience,
______________________________________________________________________(
为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.
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4 增加结果或者是效果
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一个问题
主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不 足100词，怎么弥补词数？
需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。
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▪Dear editor,
同位语
▪ I’m LiHua, a high school student in our city. I’m
writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I
Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious,
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to him. could post
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心理 感受
notice on your newspaper to tell him about the
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school.
(我们学校的学生会主席). /
a_n_e_x_c_h_a_n_g_e__s_tu_d__en__t _fr_o_m___C_h_i_n_a_._____________(来
自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend,
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1. 增加同位语 2. 补全前因后果或目的 3. 适当将写作内容具体化 4. 写出个人感受、评价或后果 5. 补充功能性（交际性）语言
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What kind of information can often be added to your article?
1 增加同位语
1 I am LiHua, _C__h_a_ir_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y__
(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
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2.补充前因后果或目的 (1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,
___________________________________________ (因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
3.适当将写作内容具体化
（1) The activity will be held from 9 a.m. to 10 ___a_._m_._o__n_A__p_ri_l _1_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_r_o_o_m___5_0_1_.__________
(具体时间、地点）
(2 )I know the owner is Steven f_r_o_m__E_n_g_la_n_d_,_a_g_e_d__3_8_, _m_a_r_ri_e_d_. (相关身份信 息)
3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _th__e_re__w__e_r_e_s_o__m_e__m__is__p_ri_n_t_s_a__n_d_p__a_g_e_s__fr_o_m_____ _2_3_-_4_5__w_e__re__m__is_s_i_n_g_.___________(具体存在问题 如错印、缺页等)
picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway
station when I was taking a ride home. There was
nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench.
The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.