现象描述+意义分析+我的观点现象描述:1. 开门见山,直接点题,2. 阐述现象的具体表现或变化(可以用例子)3. 强化主题/ 过渡句引出下文对意义的分析。
3-4句话注:在描述现象前,先思考该现象是消极还是积极,然后再选用相应模版消极现象:1. Along with/due to/as a result of the advance of ____________, countless problems are brought to our attention/ focus, one of which is that________________1.随着/由于/因为_________的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。
替换词汇:advance n. 发展deepening n.深化broadening n. 扩大(范围)2. In recent years/months (recently/nowadays), the phenomenon of _____________has aroused wid e concern/d ebate, so peopl e are in alarm that ___________最近, ____________现象引起了人们的广泛关注,人们开始担心______________。
3. One of the pressing problems facing our ___________ today is _____________.我们____如今面临的紧迫问题之一是____________One of the most serious/commonly-seen problems many people talk about centers on _____.许多人谈论的一个严重/最常见的问题集中在__________________4. a growing number of people are beginning to realize that ____________ has become a serious problem/ an urgent problem.越来越多的人意识到———已经成为一个严重的/亟待解决的问题。
5. Never before( in history) has the issue of __________ been more evident than now.(Never before has the topic of ______ been more controversial/ heatedly discussed/ valued than today.)历史上,———的问题从来没有像现在这样更加突出。
6. _______ was once seen as a blessing/luck/ virtue. Today, however, things are changing and an increasing number of _________realize that ______________.——曾经被看作是一种福气/好运/美德, 然而如今事情在变化,越来越多的——意识到——。
另:__has never been thought/ defined/ termed as a problem. (was unheard of 10 years ago)7. it is noticeable that _____ has gone wild/viral nowadays with the use/transmission of __________.值得注意的是,随着——的使用/传播,——已经很流行/很狂热了。
补充:mania n. 狂热religious mania宗教狂热the mania of online shopping 网购狂潮the global mania of English learning 全球英语学习热8. In spite of _the extraordinary progress made in science and technology__________, problems remain in terms of _guaranteeing that achievements benefit the greatest number of people____________.尽管科学技术取得了非凡的成就,但是在保证成果惠及尽可能多的人方面还存在问题.9. (we have to admit that) apart from……., _______ is yet another new and bitter situation/problem we must learn to face and deal with.(我们不得不承认)除了。
——又是一个我们必须学会面对及解决的痛苦的新情况/问题。
10. A great number of people are following the trend/ tide/ suit of doing………今年来我们可以看到很多人都在(跟风)。
积极/中性现象:1._______explodes in popularity (are gaining increasing popularity)nowadays.——突然流行开来(越来越流行)2.recently we have witnessed a prevailing trend for many people to ……….3._____has been widely seen/ talked about/used/ spread nowadaysa common occurrence/phenomenon /matter nowadays is …….目前比较常见的一种现象是______4.____refers to/ is defined as an activity/a group of people which/ who………For example,…. (直接定义式)_____ is obtaining gradual significance/attention ……._____ is highly valued in the modern society______. people attach great importance to______ by______ ___指的是。
_____越来越受到重视_______高度重视/珍视5. There is a growing tend ency nowadays that peopl e in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for _________. They are willing to _____________如今有这样一种趋势,越来越多的人都热衷于______....6. ___ has profoundly/ thoroughly/ to great extent permeated into every aspect of our daily life.___已经全面/很大程度上渗透到我们生活的方方面面意义描述:主题句(表明是消极还是积极意义)+分项说明5-6句话消极意义:1.______has much negative/adverse/ unfavorable influence/impact on ______. For one thing, it……. Foranother, it……..——有很多不好的影响, 一方面。
另一方面。
2.it is obvious that _____ has affected ______adversely. In the first place,……….. besides,…….. at last,…….很显然——对——有不利的影响。
首先,然后,最后3.____ may ha ve a detrimental and lasting influence / effect on people’s physical and spiritual health._____可能对——有长久有害的影响。
For starters,……….. additionally,……… lastly,………….4.if we ignore and let go / indulge such behaviors/problems, we are very likely to pay high price for it. Tobegin with,………. To make matter worse,…….. worst of all,……..如果我们忽视并放任该问题/行为,我们将为此付出高昂代价。
首先,更糟的是,最糟的是5.The negative/adverse/ undesirable impact it brings about can never be ignored/ underestimated. First and foremost,…….. furthermore,……… last but not least,…….不可小视/低估它所带来的负面影响。
1,2,3积极意义:1.____has much/great positive/favorable/active influence/impact on _______. One is…….. another impactis…… still another merit is…..——对——有积极/良好的影响。
一个是,另一个影响是,最后一个是。
2.the promotion of /encouragement to ________ will exert positive/upward impact on__ . mostimportantly,…….. moreover,……… the benefits can also be found in …..很显然,对于——的鼓励/支持将对——有积极影响。
最重要的是。
其次。
好处还可以在。
中看到。
3.in general/generally speaking, it will benefit both individual and the society as a whole. First of all, ……in addition,………. Finally,……..总体来说,它对于个人和整个社会都是有好处的。