英语书面表达高分与技巧一.审题1、审体裁：明确用什么文体、什么格式。

2、审人称：明确用什么人称。

3、审时态：明确本文的主要时态，使全文时态一致。

4、审要点：明确写什么，要确保要点齐全。

既要列出已知要点，还要列出隐含要点，更应列出……要点。

二. 写作建议1、正确性：书面表达必须坚持正确第一的原则，保证所写句子在语法上、结构上是正确的、得体的，尤其是文章的开头和结尾。

2、条理性：在确保正确的前提下，适当运用一些连接词或连接句，使文章条理清晰。

同时还要学会分段。

3、多样性：在确保正确的前提下，要追求句型表达的多样性。

4、复杂性：在确保正确的前提下，要追求词汇词组及句型的复杂性。

5、规范性：要用黑色笔答题，不乱涂乱划，不超出答题区域，字迹要端正，标点符号不乱用。

三. 短语优先原则书面表达时，能用短语时，尽量用短语。

它会使文章增加亮点，提升文章的档次，也会给阅卷老师留下一个好印象。

1、因为……没有……因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。

He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill.He didn’t atten d the meeting yesterday on account of his illness.He was absent from the meeting yesterday owing to/ due to his illness.His illness accounted for his absence from the meeting yesterday.His illness prevented him from attending the meeting yesterday.2、喜欢……当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。

When he was a child, he liked to learn everything.As a child, he was fond of learning.When he was a child, he was addicted to knowledge.As a child, he was mad about knowledge.When he was a child, he was crazy about learning.As a child, he took great pleasure in learning.When he was a child, he had a strong desire/ passion for knowledge.When he was a child, he had a strong appetite for knowledge.3、认为……有75%的学生认为五一节高三学生应该放假。

75% students think that the Senior 3 students should have a holiday on May Day. Most students , about 75%, hold the view that the Senior 3 should have a holiday on May Day.The majority of the students accept the idea that the Senior 3 should have a holiday on May Day.In the opinion of most students, about 3 out of 4, the Senior 3 students should take some days off on May Day.From the point of most students’ view,…As far as they are concerned,…4、感谢……如果能考虑我的申请，我不胜感激。

I’ll thank you if you can think about my application.I’ll be grateful / thankful to you if you can think about my application.I’ll thank you from the bottom of my heart if you can take my application into consideration.I’ll appreciate it if you can take my application into account.5、尽力…我们将尽力按时完成任务。

We’ll do our best to finish our task in time.We’ll do whatever we can to finish the task in time.We’ll make great efforts to finish the task in time.We’ll devote our efforts to finishing the task in time.We’ll spare no efforts to finish the task in time.6、突然想到了……我突然想到了一个好注意。

Suddenly I had a good idea.All of a sudden, I thought of a good idea.All of a sudden, I came up with a good idea.All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.All of a sudden, a good idea flashed across my mind.7、非常吃惊污染如此严重，他非常吃惊。

The pollution was so serious. He was very surprised.He was very surprised to see the pollution was so serious.He showed great surprise to see how serious the pollution was.To his great surprise, he found it was so seriously polluted.What surprised him most was that it was so seriously polluted.四．一二三原则?1) 1st, 2nd, 3rd, at last (反对）2）first, second, third, last（不推荐）??3）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐）4）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）??5）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）??6）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）??7）most important of all/ first of all, moreover, finally??8）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）??9）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）五．多变句式原则??多变句式指：写作时要适当使用复合句、非谓语形式、被动语态、倒装句、强调句型等，使文章更精彩。

1、合并句子：1）高考临近，我们没有心情去游玩。

The College Entrance Exam is coming near. We have no interest in going anywhere. The College Entrance Exam is on the way so we have no desire to go anywhere.With the College Entrance Exam drawing near, we have no appetite to go anywhere.2) 他喜欢踢足球，也喜欢打篮球。

He enjoys playing football. He also enjoys playing basketball.Not only does he enjoy playing football, but also he enjoys playing basketball.2、改变语态：1）他在英语方面已经取得了很大的进步。

He has made rapid progress in English.Rapid progress has been made in English.2) 我们应尽力阻止环境遭到破坏。

We should make great efforts to prevent the environment from being destroyed.Great efforts should be made to prevent the environment from being destroyed.3、使用短语：1）我英语好，我愿意为大会做志愿者（volunteer).I’m good at English, so I’d like to be a volunteer for the meeting.With a good knowledge of English, I’d like to be a volunteer for the meeting.2) 这辆汽车质量好，价格也合理。

The quality of the car is good, and the price of the car is reasonable.In addition to the good quality, the price of the car is also reasonable.4、使用非谓语形式：1）我愿意在下周五举行的会议上做志愿者。

I would like to be a volunteer for the meeting which will be held next Monday.I have a strong desire to be a volunteer for the meeting to be held next Monday.2) 当我发现这么多人坐在教室里，我很紧张。