如何写出满分作文一、写出正确句子观察下面的句子错句：It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields.修改：It was raining hard; they could not work in the fields.It was raining hard. They could not work in the fields.It was raining so hard that they couldn’t work in the fields.They couldn’t work in the fields because it was raining hard.It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields.（Which one is preferable depends on the context and the writer’s intention.）二、简单句、并列句与复合句的转化一篇文章含有的句子具有种类的多样性, 可以是简单句、并列句与复合句。
三种句式配合使用会产生错落有致的美感。
我们了解一下它们的特点：简单句、并列句与复合句的特点1. 合并简单句成为复合句或并列句例句：My mother works in a bank. My mother is forty-eight.第一种方法：合并为并列句：My mother is forty-eight and she works in a bank.第二种方法：运用引导词连接为复合句：My mother is forty-eight, who works in a bank.2. 将下列简单句连成复合句或并列句。
(1) For some people mathematics is a great pleasure.They are able to think absolutely.(2) A team of management consultants was called in to make an investigation.Production had dropped 14 percent over the past year.(3) I visited my uncle.I had not seen my uncle for eight years._______________________________________________________________________________(4) The husbands discussed sports.The wives discussed their children.(5) We hoped the rain would soon stop.We would hate to spend the whole day amusing ourselves indoors.(6) I will apply for a teaching job in the university.I may be able to remain in school and pursue a career I like.(7) World WarⅡended in 1945.There soon began the cold war(8) Jane Eyre was sent to Lowood Asylum.Jane Eyre was treated harshly in the institution.(9) Many readers criticized the book severely.The author had to make major revisions in the second edition.(10) Ptolemy believed the earth was the center of the universe.Copernicus believed the earth and other planets revolved around the sun.三、扩写扩句是在基本句型的基础上, 添加各种修饰成分, 使句子得到扩展, 即根据表达的需求增加定语, 状语, 同位语等成分, 或者举例子补充细节内容, 或者添加谚语俗语等。
I. 句子扩写：请根据要求将下列简单句进行扩句。
1. We arrived in Sanya. (添加副词)扩写：We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly.2. I like to make friends with my classmates. (添加定语从句)扩写：I like to make friends with my classmates, who have the same interest as me.3. We were happy and returned home. (添加状语从句)扩写：We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.4. I like reading books. (通过举例补充细节)扩写：I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.5. We should study hard. （添加谚语）扩写：As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”. So we should study hard.6. I often join in many activities. (添加目的状语)扩写：I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind.II. 篇章训练试题要求：假如你是一名中学生, 请以My colorful school life为题, 写一篇短文。
要求100个字左右。
开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总数。
要点提示：1：上课认真听讲2：课后完成作业3：经常参加体育锻炼4：去图书馆阅读学生习作：I’m a junior middle school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have beenworking hard.I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I oftenread in the school library.May there always be colorful life around my school.（老师点评：该学生能完整的写出各个要点, 没有出现太大的语法错误, 表达通顺, 单词拼写无误。
但是很明显字数不够, 没有达到100个字左右, 字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。
其次, 句子的表达过于平淡无奇, 没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇, 固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。
而且, 没有使用连接词, 上下文的连接不够顺畅。
）步骤一：扩展句子1: 增加目的状语从句I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.2: 增加定语从句I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.3: 举例说明I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton, etc.4: 增加时间状语从句I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.步骤二：润色句子1: 把第一句换成it当形式主语的用法, 使句式多样化。
It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.2: 增加了take…seriously和in time两个短语, 是句子更加生动。
I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.3: 增加了in order to do sth目的状语和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。
In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with myclassmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.4: 使用过去分词短语当状语, 再添加短语develop the habit of …使文章增加亮点Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.步骤三：连句成篇“过渡词”在文章中起着承上启下的作用, 它好比一座桥梁, 能将全文各句有机地联系在一起, 从而使句子不再是孤立的独立的个体。
使用表示转折, 并列, 递进, 因果关系等连词把句子连接起来, 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分, 使全文结构紧凑, 使上下文更加通顺, 逻辑性更强。
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.（原文已给）First of all(过渡词), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. What’s more(过渡词), I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(过渡词), In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton, etc. Finally(过渡词), interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.May there always be colorful life around my school.（原文已给）。