The similarities and differences between British and Chinese
education
China has a long history in of education. The education system is being consummated gradually，While The Great Britain is the typical r epresentative of western educator, who owns more advanced education system .
第一段，就是开头，无实质性内容
No matter the education in the UK or in the china , education is the process through schools, colleges, universities, and other institutions, deliberately transmits its cultural heritage—its accumulated knowledge, values, and skills--from one generation to another. And the purpose of school is to provide children with literacy and other basic skills which they will need to become active members of society and build their future .
第二段，就是The similarities,但我也不知道该写什么，就差不多写的算是教育的本质概念吧，你说：“
特别是第二段一会儿讲中国好一会儿讲英国好。

最好能分不同方面讲，
比如：从学生基础知识方面，学生实践能力方面分析。

或者从优缺点两方面讲，第一段讲中英教育分别有的有点第二段讲中英教育的缺点。

这样文章更清晰一些。

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我觉得你是在说第三段吧，
However there are tremendous differences about in education between United Kingdom and China. There are a number of phenomena to illustrate it. For example ,in China, students have to spend almost all their time on studying t heir major courses such as English, math, biology, geography and so on, which is boring. English, math, biology, geography and so on that are boring as their major courses W hile students in the UK are taught music, art and so on and they spend much free
time on what they are interested Morever, Teachers and students would like to be the friends in the UK. They enjoy discussing and solving questions in class .On the contrary in China teachers are over-strict.And Students are quiet and absolutely taught in class .；However the most attractive point in Chinese education system is that Chinese people emphasize the traditional knowledge, which makes the students have a solid foundation. While the western students learn slowly.
Innovation and creativity are the most different point in the education system. Sometimes, Chinese education limit s students sense of innovation；…(英文中应该有分号的吧；我把符号改改，还有英文中，省略号可以这样用吧？)
第三段就是Difference,现象举例吧，是这段不清不楚吗？
There are a lot of differences between the education systems, which caused by a lot of reasons, such as culture differences, economic reasons, and concepts, etc. As far as Chinese population is concerned, there are over 60 students in a classroom. It’s too noisy if everyone take s apart in the discussion. Chinese students must study hard to have enough abilities to make money ; otherwise there are no ways to a splendid future. And the traditional concepts in many Chinese students are that they learn just because they want get higher education and all kinds of certifications to get a good job easily. For the economy, our government also can’t offer the teachers the best facilities for researching and give the students more chances to practice.
第四段写的就是一些原因，这个……
In my opinon, the two have their own merits and defects. In sum,although students in the UK seem to live independently, think creatively and innovatively, and be well-prepared to go into the society,they are not as industrious and earnest as Chinese students and If there is no language problem Chinese students will easily pass any examination s. But we must admit that the most radical deficiency of Chinese education system is that it can,t cultivate students’other abilities. Most students maybe know about the knowledge, but they do not know how to practice in reality. Nonetheless unfortunately(Nonetheless unfortunately二选一)employers value personal ability much rather than the study results in the future job-hunting process. So Something action must be taken to change the situation to improve their practice abilities based on circumstances within our country.
第五段写的自己的观点
整体
这个我不太清楚你的意思啊，咱能具体点指出一点吗
或者说，你看看下面的照片，是要求，这个…………
我是按照老师要求的1,2,3，写的，这个结构问题嘛，好吧，我也不知道怎么搞
这个问题，555╮(╯▽╰)╭，嘻嘻
你的意思是让我把中英教育的优点化一段，缺点划一段，原因划一段，结论花一
段吗？。